War and Refugee Life

From the depth
of last night
I passed the puzzle of blood;

On the lap of this morning’s mother sun
I’m making my world
as like as the weaving net of spider


-March 25, 2019, Chattogram
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Milgate Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 4:42 PM
good poem, same as other comment thought the spider's web and puzzle of blood all interesting unique images. Life is really hard for so many.
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March 26, 2019 at 4:45 AM
Great description, "puzzle of blood"; war is so difficult; especially for the refugees; it takes a lot to get through it. I like the idea of the "spider's web", as a way of surviving. Well done.
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