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War Square

In a world of squares without flower, friend or bench is merely war square

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 6/27/2019 3:08:00 PM

Alkas if you look at a lot of indigenous people they live in round spaces. Teepee tents. Mongolian yurts. A circle has no war borders.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/29/2019 12:29:00 PM

Thank you for the explanation Alkas. Always good to read what the poet's intent. Reading again, it makes all so much sense. Thank you Alkas.

Alkas Poetry
Date: 6/28/2019 6:18:00 AM

Yes Jeff you made your comment based on spatial geometry, square and round and you made it in a very smart way... i am going to consider that as a source...My poem is about Town square without flowers, friends, benches like piazza, platz... I made analogy with WAR SQUARE, plaza de guerra.... just twisting a little the meaning... I use as poetry...really circle has no border, no war boarder... alkas