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Wanted Zero Repetitious Unsure Imitating Boring Uninspiring Turn Opportunist Empathy Proficient Surprising Reserving Enabling Consolidated Able-bodied Hero 2019 June 08 *3rd Place* Sparkling Diamonds ~~Joseph May

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Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2019 9:22:00 PM

Nicely penned William, Congrats on your win..

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/25/2019 7:00:00 PM

Congrats on your placement!;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/9/2019 11:54:00 PM

I like hero at the end; I did not realize it was Andrea's idea, but it was a good change.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/10/2019 12:31:00 AM

In the actual movie--if unseen-- he turns out to be the best 'assassin' (the word before Andrea's contribution) that there was to be Caren, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2019 10:21:00 AM

Interesting choice of opposites! I think you should change the assassin to a hero. It rhymes with the zero too!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/8/2019 10:24:00 AM

PERFECT! Me thanks overflows dear Andrea for it is done! Aloha William