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Repetitious Unsure
Imitating Boring Uninspiring
Turn Opportunist Empathy Proficient
Surprising Reserving Enabling
Consolidated Able-bodied
Hero Date: 06/08/2019

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Date: 6/25/2019 9:22:00 PM
Nicely penned William, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/25/2019 7:00:00 PM
Congrats on your placement!;)
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Date: 6/9/2019 11:54:00 PM
I like hero at the end; I did not realize it was Andrea's idea, but it was a good change.
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Date: 6/10/2019 12:31:00 AM
In the actual movie--if unseen-- he turns out to be the best 'assassin' (the word before Andrea's contribution) that there was to be Caren, Aloha William
Date: 6/8/2019 10:21:00 AM
Interesting choice of opposites! I think you should change the assassin to a hero. It rhymes with the zero too!!
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/8/2019 10:24:00 AM
PERFECT! Me thanks overflows dear Andrea for it is done! Aloha William