William Kelii Kekaula Poet Diamante

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Wanted

Wanted


Zero

Repetitious     Unsure

Imitating     Boring     Uninspiring

Turn     Opportunist     Empathy     Proficient 

Surprising     Reserving     Enabling

Consolidated     Able-bodied

Hero


2019 June 08

*3rd Place*

Sparkling Diamonds
~~Joseph May

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Joseph May June 25, 2019 at 9:22 PM Nicely penned William, Congrats on your win..

Brenda Chiri June 25, 2019 at 7:00 PM Congrats on your placement!;)

Caren Krutsinger June 9, 2019 at 11:54 PM I like hero at the end; I did not realize it was Andrea's idea, but it was a good change. William Kelii Kekaula June 10, 2019 at 12:31 AM In the actual movie--if unseen-- he turns out to be the best 'assassin' (the word before Andrea's contribution) that there was to be Caren, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2019 at 10:21 AM Interesting choice of opposites! I think you should change the assassin to a hero. It rhymes with the zero too!! William Kelii Kekaula June 8, 2019 at 10:24 AM PERFECT! Me thanks overflows dear Andrea for it is done! Aloha William