Wanderings of Soul

Wanderings of soul



Couldn't see the colour of the sky,
Nor the birds, their flight so high,
The greens were lost in twilight,
Didn't you see tears in my eyes ?

My stray soul that still wanders,
Passion swamps mind that ponders,
Parallel walk yet no greet,
Will the two banks ever meet ?

Vibrant dreams await fulfil,
Desires in heart deep instil,
Quell pain of eternity,
Do I live infinity ?

Till wrinkles on skin appear,
Emotions to mind will steer,
Till rainbow in sky will fade,
Can I beat my weary jade ?

Wanderings of soul will end,
Love if you could just pretend,
Your lie would be worth a price,
Can't you see tears in my eyes ?







Written December 7th, 2014
Iambic heptameter 
For contest 'Iambic verse' by Giorgio A.V.

Now for PD's contest "Best poem of 2014 contest"
Awarded 10th place

Now entered for "Your best old poem contest" by Judy Konos
Awarded 1st place win

Entered for "Best love poem #4" poetry contest by SKAT A
Awarded 9th place win

Now entered for "Favourite" poetry contest by Casarah
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Devnath  Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend, bl
Kimathi Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Congrats Dr. Upma, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
Dutta Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 7:15 AM
very nicely composed. Congrats Upma to win. Hugs
Nance Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 10:26 PM
A skillful pen, it was a pleasure reading you again :)
Callus Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this latest contest (Skat's), Upma. I see a soul here ever wandering in search of love. This Quatorzain form is new to me; I'll have to look it up. // paul
Gentry Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tender and sad love poem!
Raven Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, dropping by with Congratulations in your placement in Skat's contest....Vlad.
Roper Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Dr Upma, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
A  Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Dr Upma, thank you for the support. :) SK
Haight Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 9:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 3:45 PM
DR UPMA, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
Tor Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Dr. Sharma heartfelt write congratulations on your 1st place win!!!!
La France Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Upma, I was researching the form Quatorzain and came upon this wonderful example, well done 7, interesting form that I am planning to try very soon
A   Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:24 PM
DR UPMA, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Very different poem Dr. Sharma. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 5:51 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan x
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 5:04 AM
Though sad but wonderful poem, congratulations on the win, Dr. Upma
Kayode Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 1:54 PM
A super work here,congrats on the win Upma...huggs
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Beautiful pen, Dr.Upma! Enjoyed it my dear friend! A 7 for you! Have a very nice week! Love and hugs! :) xxx D.
Smith Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 2:09 PM
This is really good Upma....Very deep showcasing your soul...hugs Tim
Lindley Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 1:14 PM
You have nailed it with this fine write my friend. "My stray soul that still wanders, Passion swamps mind that ponders, Parallel walk yet no greet, Will the two banks ever meet ?" Solid gold verses and each question highlights ever greater the message! Super 7 on this and so enjoyed reading this today!
Parker Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 11:28 AM
Kahlil Girban once said " if love finds you worthy it will find you" my first thought after reading this captivating poem
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