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Wanderings of Soul

Wanderings of soul Couldn't see the colour of the sky, Nor the birds, their flight so high, The greens were lost in twilight, Didn't you see tears in my eyes ? My stray soul that still wanders, Passion swamps mind that ponders, Parallel walk yet no greet, Will the two banks ever meet ? Vibrant dreams await fulfil, Desires in heart deep instil, Quell pain of eternity, Do I live infinity ? Till wrinkles on skin appear, Emotions to mind will steer, Till rainbow in sky will fade, Can I beat my weary jade ? Wanderings of soul will end, Love if you could just pretend, Your lie would be worth a price, Can't you see tears in my eyes ? Written December 7th, 2014 Iambic heptameter For contest 'Iambic verse' by Giorgio A.V. Now for PD's contest "Best poem of 2014 contest" Awarded 10th place Now entered for "Your best old poem contest" by Judy Konos Awarded 1st place win Entered for "Best love poem #4" poetry contest by SKAT A Awarded 9th place win Now entered for "Favourite" poetry contest by Casarah

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Date: 5/6/2016 11:17:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/6/2016 11:10:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Upma, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/6/2016 7:15:00 AM
very nicely composed. Congrats Upma to win. Hugs
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Date: 5/4/2016 10:26:00 PM
A skillful pen, it was a pleasure reading you again :)
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Date: 2/18/2016 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this latest contest (Skat's), Upma. I see a soul here ever wandering in search of love. This Quatorzain form is new to me; I'll have to look it up. // paul
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this tender and sad love poem!
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:39:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, dropping by with Congratulations in your placement in Skat's contest....Vlad.
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:24:00 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:28:00 AM
Dr Upma, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:03:00 AM
Dr Upma, thank you for the support. :) SK
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Date: 12/17/2015 9:00:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/17/2015 3:45:00 PM
DR UPMA, Congrats on your old best poem. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 12/17/2015 2:04:00 PM
Dr. Sharma heartfelt write congratulations on your 1st place win!!!!
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Date: 6/20/2015 8:31:00 AM
Upma, I was researching the form Quatorzain and came upon this wonderful example, well done 7, interesting form that I am planning to try very soon
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Date: 3/9/2015 4:24:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:24:00 PM
DR UPMA, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:36:00 AM
Very different poem Dr. Sharma. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/17/2014 5:51:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 12/17/2014 5:04:00 AM
Though sad but wonderful poem, congratulations on the win, Dr. Upma
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:54:00 PM
A super work here,congrats on the win Upma...huggs
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:07:00 AM
Beautiful pen, Dr.Upma! Enjoyed it my dear friend! A 7 for you! Have a very nice week! Love and hugs! :) xxx D.
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Date: 12/7/2014 2:09:00 PM
This is really good Upma....Very deep showcasing your soul...hugs Tim
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Date: 12/7/2014 1:14:00 PM
You have nailed it with this fine write my friend. "My stray soul that still wanders, Passion swamps mind that ponders, Parallel walk yet no greet, Will the two banks ever meet ?" Solid gold verses and each question highlights ever greater the message! Super 7 on this and so enjoyed reading this today!
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Date: 12/7/2014 11:28:00 AM
Kahlil Girban once said " if love finds you worthy it will find you" my first thought after reading this captivating poem
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