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Wandering Home

bursting brightness held within surreal sprite trapped by skin waiting for release and home unsure wanderer oft praying in psalms head bowed fingers laced so tight kneeling at the bed's sharp edge join the one soul in delight come cleansed, and reborn to heavenly home *Pariku

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2012 9:24:00 PM

Hi Debbie, another wonderful win, Congratulations in Rick's 7/7/7/10 - (x2) contest. :-) always~ PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/21/2012 8:49:00 AM

Congrats on your beautiful spiritual write and awesome win, Debbie! Love and Blessings, Rhonda :))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "7/7/7/10-x2"" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2012 2:54:00 AM

breathtaking in a spiritual way, debbie.. congrats and huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2012 8:27:00 PM

I really like how you did yours, Debbie. I know I entered this one, but it was so long ago I forgot what I entered and what I did wrong with mine. anyway, big congratulations. I think yours is one of the best I've read!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/20/2012 9:42:00 AM

congrats Debbie on a marvelous write and win for Rick's challenge.. bravo..luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/20/2012 4:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your smashing win xx

David Williams

Date: 8/20/2012 2:43:00 AM

Debbie congrats on your great win....David

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/20/2012 2:12:00 AM

Wonderful and intriguing piece,Debbie...Congratulations on your superb win..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2012 12:12:00 AM

you made my heart sing, debbie, and i need that right now... so graciously done with hope arising!... thanks for appreciating my summer piece; i am a summer girl... shine on!..:) huggs!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/16/2012 1:42:00 PM

A poem of faith by you, gives me faith IN you....that you will always always bring something new and wonderful to my attention. You always do. And again, you have honored me in your contest, and I am very grateful. From you, it means even more than you might know! Thank you!

Robert Ball

Date: 6/16/2012 6:35:00 AM

Miss Debbie? well I don't know if your single or married so Miss. Last time I spoke to you I talked about someone using our poems for their interest, well after the final analyst with my works for the Father I decided at least the word is getting out and that is all that counts. You are good in your style and I love reading your poetry, have a blessed day. God bless bob

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/14/2012 7:22:00 PM

Good verse you have here Debbie. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/13/2012 8:10:00 PM

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