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Waltzing In the Stars - a Collaboration With Susan

(It has been a pleasure and an honour to work upon this collaboration with you Susan. You made the process enjoyable and so easy. Your pen gave this wonderful write its soul. Our ink shared in the stars embrace within the joy of waltzing beauty. Thank you for allowing me to share ink with you Susan. It has been a joy.) In dream's embrace, I hear sweet music play, my arms filled with your temple so sublime. Your beauty shines across God's timeless sea, within the star's brocade my brightest light. Come waltz with me betwixt eternal stars, love croons its serenade within our hearts. Come dance with me across this stardust floor, in swirls of love we’re waltzing in the stars. The distant stars are here within your eyes in luminary love I am entranced, you sweep me up within your rhythmic sway and stir me with your breath upon my cheek. Warm lips impassioned whispering my name; your craving lights me up with bliss tonight. We rise and fall amidst soft moonbeam’s muse enraptured in our waltz among the stars. Within moonglow, our spotlight in the night, to heartbeats of desire we dance in time, my love, we are aflame in passion’s heat, in soulful heart to heart our love does sing. Within your goddess presence I am lost so deep within the dance that binds our joy, we whirl in Luna-light your lips on mine in fervent love we’re waltzing in the stars. Ethereal and lyrical we are our magic on this night is heaven sent, what wondrous thrills we glide on melodies oh, lustrous love is here within our reach. We strum each other our sweet music lush our beings are the instruments of love, ascending heights your touch is taking me in supernova waltz among the stars. 12/01/2019. "Waltzing In The Stars." A Collaboration by, Susan Ashley. & Michael ,P, Clarje.

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Robertina B.

Date: 2/8/2019 4:28:00 AM

Wow!!! A poetess and a Poet creating such a Magnificent masterpeice of pure magic.. I was taken away.. This beautiful write took my breath away!! A belated Congratulations on your POTD.. This is definitely a fav for me.. Dear Susan and dear Vladislav, this collaboration represents pure joy.. Many Blessings!

Vladislav Raven
Date: 2/9/2019 9:46:00 AM

Hi Robertina, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. it was an honour and a pleasure to work on this wonderful collaboration with Susan. It was a most enjoyable process. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/17/2019 6:18:00 PM

I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/13/2019 9:33:00 PM

My dear friend, it is a sweet pleasure and an immense honor to share Poem Of The Day honors with you for this heavenly poem. It was special to me as soon as I read your dreamy and inspiring verses that began our collaboration. Your verses are stardusted in romantic magic, Mike, and your shining words led the way to our waltzing in the stars. Thank you for sharing your poetic passion, brilliant artistry and your friendship with me, Mike. May you always shine brightly, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/13/2019 10:15:00 PM

It was indeed a pleasure and an honour Susan. I enjoyed the process so much. I hope that we can dance again some time. I thank you for sharing the beauty of your verses and your creativity. You sing in golden words. The journey has been taken together and the song now sung. Joy we have shared this day. Equal billing it is. Have a most wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/13/2019 7:33:00 PM

This is beautiful in so many amazing ways!! Your words caress the page with such elegance and grace- with love and passion. Simply breathtaking. You and Susan have created a masterpiece. :) Brandy

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/13/2019 8:06:00 PM

Hi Brandy, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It was an honour and a pleasure to share ink with Susan on this wonderful piece. Susan enhanced the piece with her wonderful pen. I am glad that the Poem Of The Day honour went to Susan's posting. The enhancements made the piece what it is. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs..Mike. XX

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/13/2019 2:06:00 PM

WoW! Mike, I already commented on Susan's page.You and Susan have done it again with such a well written collaboration! It is so beautiful, romantic and dreamy. I can't say enough, how well you two write together. Mike I enjoyed you and Susan's lovely waltz. Waltz on my talented friend. Congratulations to you both for getting the poem of the day. It was most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/13/2019 6:51:00 PM

HI Alexis, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, we are so glad you liked the piece. I am so glad that it was Susn'a posting of the piece that was chosen as Poem Of The Day. Susan's changes totally enhanced the write. It has been a true joy, a pleasant surprise. have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2019 8:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Mike :) - A really beautiful co-write from you - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/13/2019 10:00:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by with the congratulations on our poem of the day. I was so pleased to find that they had the honour of Poem Of The Day to Susan's posting. It was through Susan's changes that the collaboration was enhanced. I am so happy it happened this way. It was an honour and a pleasure to share Ink on this piece. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2019 11:27:00 AM

Wow, two fantastic poets that have written an amazing piece of poetry... So many great lines in this one... A great collab is always one, where you can't tell who wrote which stanza and this is the case here..

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/13/2019 9:29:00 AM

Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It is an honour and a pleasure to have shared ink with Susan on this wonderful peace. Susan put so much work into this collaboration that she truly deserves the plaudits on this piece. have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/12/2019 11:23:00 AM

This is magnificent poetry melded into a romantic offering of celestial and emotional renderings singing in tune with heavenly bodies, divine crafted verses of love and passion! Bravo! A truly wondrous and great collaboration by two of my very dear friends! A fav-- a gem shining for all to see..

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/12/2019 3:52:00 PM

Hi Robert, thank you for dropping by, the comment and the Fave on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It was an honour and a pleasure to write with Susan on this collaboration. Susan deserves the plaudits for the changes she did make truly enhanced the piece. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/12/2019 7:51:00 AM

You two waltz so very well together, Mike & Susan, thus delivering such seamless, powerful passionate, romantic lines! A pleasure to read! Best regards to you both...paul

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/12/2019 3:35:00 PM

Hi Paul, thank you for saying how well we waltz my friend. Thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It was a pleasure and an honour to write with Susan. The Plaudits of this write truly do belong to Susan, the changes she did make so enhanced the write. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2019 7:25:00 AM

Awesome collaboration between two of the best...your poem is quite enchanting and rhythmic..I enjoyed reading it. Kudos to you Mike and Susan.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/12/2019 2:39:00 PM

Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It was an honour and a pleasure to work on this piece with Susan. I have to say that Susan does deserve the plaudits, making the write special, giving it its soul. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2019 3:23:00 AM

What a stunning verse both you and Susan have produced, you work so well together. Tom.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/12/2019 2:23:00 PM

Hi Tom, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It was indeed a pleasure and an honor to work on this piece with Susan. Susan gave the write its soul and I feel she deserves all the Plaudits. The piece was enhanced by Susan. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/11/2019 11:46:00 PM

Very beautiful, I commented on Susans post as well!

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/12/2019 2:09:00 PM

Hi Arthur, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It was an honour and a pleasure to work on this wonderful write with Susan, indeed, Susan truly deserves all the plaudits, for she truly enhanced the piece. Susan gave the piece its soul. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2019 8:00:00 PM

It does indeed "feel" like a supernova waltz the way this reads, so lilting! Susan is such a fine writer, so together you create a most beautiful dance.

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 8:14:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. You are correct, Susan is such a wonderful poet. It has been an honour and a pleasure to be able to share ink with her. Susan made the process enjoyable and easy. The plaudits for this write should go to Susan's post. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/11/2019 7:42:00 PM

My dear friend, I enjoyed being your dance partner in this beautiful and dreamy collaboration. It was my honor and wonderful pleasure to spill ink with you, Mike, your shining verses gave this gem its sparkling spirit and passionate pulse. Thank you for extending your gracious invitation to compose with you and also for making this a joyful creative experience. Your artistry is forever brilliant, Mike. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 8:06:00 PM

Hi Susan, thank you for taking the time to share ink with me on this wonderful write. It has been an honour and a pleasure to share ink with you on our dance in the stars. You gave the soul and light to the whole peace with your wonderful words. Your creativity forever shines. You made this such a joyful and easy process. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/11/2019 7:40:00 PM

I left a comment on this earlier, but maybe you reposted it. Your collaboration is seamless; I cannot tell who wrote which verses. Quite a passionate love poem. Congratulations on writing so well together! Hugs, Carolyn

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 8:01:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, no need to be embarrassed, this is me remember. It never even crossed my mind that there would be any comments on the piece at the moment. This is turning into a good early morning for me Carolyn. Thank you for your kind visit. Hugs....Mike. XX

Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/11/2019 7:51:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, I have done the same thing myself with comments. Thank you for dropping by our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. Iit has been a pleasure and an honour to work on this starlit dance with Susan. Once again the process was made so easy. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/11/2019 7:41:00 PM

Oh, I'm embarrassed. I'd left the comment on Susan's post. Well done for both of you!