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Waltz With Me

Dance with me. Waltz with me. One two three; One two three. Lead me so sweetly over the floor. Dance with me. Waltz with me. The one I adore - ever more you shall be. June 13, 2021 for Kim Merryman's Waltz Wave Contest Poetry Contest Rules for this form: A Waltz Wave has 19 lines with a syllable count of:1,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,3,4,3,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,1. There is no rhyme scheme but you can rhyme if you want. MUST BE CENTERED!

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/28/2021 4:33:00 AM

Hi Andrea, An excellent idea and deserved first medal. Well done. Thanks for mail re my entry Howard

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/26/2021 7:40:00 PM

Simply divine … the rhythm generated! Amazing! Congrats on your top win, Andrea

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/26/2021 11:54:00 AM

Andrea, the rhythm and flow of your words gave me a vivid picture of the couple dancing! Beautiful! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2021 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely dance and poem. Enjoy your win/day with blessings....................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/25/2021 11:30:00 AM

This is amazing! A true gem. I love it. Congrats and God bless you always, Love, Gina

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/24/2021 9:29:00 PM

Congratulations on this beautiful creation. Thank you very much for commenting on my works and making me grow. Your comments matter much to me. I really like your works. They are great. Write more so that the readers benefit. Thanking you.

Marilene Evans

Date: 6/24/2021 3:16:00 PM

Congrats, Andrea. Love it.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/24/2021 2:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest top win, Andrea. You desreve it with this very well penned poem. Blessings and regards

Terry Flood

Date: 6/24/2021 2:31:00 PM

Smashing write Andrea. Congrats on your top spot. Terry

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/15/2021 5:23:00 AM

Lovely! I was like dancing and moving to the beats of your poem dear Andrea!!! Awesome..A fav!

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2021 8:23:00 PM

WoW! Andrea, It's such a lovely waltz. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 6/14/2021 9:09:00 AM

It must have been a beautiful elegant Waltz my dear sweet friend... You did this so well with perfect syllable count... Best wishes Andrea... Hugs... ~ Ani

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2021 5:29:00 AM

This reads like a waltz, I find myself counting and stepping Andrea.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/14/2021 1:59:00 AM

So long as it's a slow waltz. I'm too old for the fast ones. Hugs.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/13/2021 3:39:00 PM

I picture you & Joe...very sweet!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/13/2021 10:41:00 PM

HA. He has not dance with me in all my life, James. He even refused to dance while we were dating. One time he got drunk and I got him to free style for a few seconds. Then I understood why he refuses.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/13/2021 3:39:00 PM

Andrea, Very nice slow dance in Verse. An invitation to join in the joy; one found in a perfectly titled 'Waltz With Me'. Good luck. -Richard

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2021 2:35:00 PM

absolutely delightful I think you will waltz to a place on the winner's list:-) hugs Jan xx