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Waltz Wave

The music pumps out life, as we dance beneath stars. Let us freely waltz below the moon, you and I under the heavens. I know you love me, I love you too.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/17/2023 1:51:00 AM

That waltz will last forever. Lovely shape. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/17/2023 3:55:00 AM

I hope so Victor, forever in God's Kingdom after this one lol

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/16/2023 7:36:00 PM

Adorable, Mystic. Dance the night away, gw

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/17/2023 3:55:00 AM

I intend to Gershon, as long as God gives me courage and health.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/16/2023 7:10:00 PM

Vienna, such a fantastic work is a delight to read. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you employ. Win big

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/17/2023 3:55:00 AM

Thankyou Sotto for reading and commenting, how lovely ,

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/16/2023 3:37:00 PM

How tender and sweet--delightful words of love--waltzing.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/17/2023 3:54:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, thank you for appreciating the dance of love

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/16/2023 2:04:00 PM

What a great poem, and art work, love it

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/17/2023 3:54:00 AM

Thank you Stephan, I have sent you a soup mail