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Waltz In The Sunlight

Sway like the breeze On a spring eve, Watching the flame Of the sun, How can our eyes Ever leave here, When Nature has Burned through Our soul. Speak with the eyes That serenade me, Let's dance with the stars Of the night, Hold me closer Than ever, Let's dance 'til The morning is light. Let's waltz through your soul 'Til the morning, 'Til the coldness Is no longer cold, Let's picture and frame An eternity Of two lovers who never grow old . Let's dance to the Rays of the sun, While the sand caresses Us whole, Let's delve into Each others dreams And wherever they Beckon, we roam. Let's dream every Dream we imagined, And follow the Scent of the sun. Let's smile through tears Once borrowed. And every day A new dance begun. Let's live in this Moment forever, With the riches and rags That we own, Let's greet every day Like our last And waltz in the Sunlight as one . We'd danced in Eachother's shadows, Now shadows No longer remain. Let's dance now With the angels And waltz to the Rhythm, of Love's flame. Let's waltz through your soul 'Til the morning, 'Til the coldness Is no longer cold, Let's picture and frame An eternity Of two lovers who never grow old .

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Date: 3/2/2024 4:11:00 PM
outstanding poem, Daniel...a masterpiece in my eyes. Outstanding imagery coupled with the beauty of true and timeless love made for an uplifting read. What I liked the most about this poem was the message of living fully in the moments. I especially liked "let's waltz through your soul." Divine words, truly. have a great weekend, Sara
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/3/2024 2:24:00 AM
Good Morning Sara, thank you for your beautiful words , it's definitely a piece , I'm still looking for the master bit , but I shall persist , and I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading the poem . Daniel
Date: 3/2/2024 2:17:00 PM
Hello Daniel, your poem is a breathtaking scene of love and connection, painted with the palette of nature's beauty and the warmth of human emotion. The imagery you creat, from dancing under the stars to embracing the sunlight, speaks to the timeless essence of romance and companionship. Your words capture the essence of seizing each moment with passion and grace. This is a deeply personal and evocative piece—it's to cherish the dance of life and love, embracing every step with open hearts and boundless joy. - Blessings, Daniel
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/3/2024 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Daniel , your kind words always mean so much to me , sometimes the eye and the pen conspire against me. To write is to show emotion within a story that hopefully touches someone's , heart , soul , mind , that's all any of us can do , is but try . Daniel
Date: 3/2/2024 4:11:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/2/2024 5:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanette for your time and kind words . They are much appreciated. Daniel

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