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Waltz Among the Flowers POTD

whirling rose petals
as they move to dream music
sunflower acclaim

dips in dahlias
orange yellow cream and red
spins past snapdragons 

four o'clock fragrance
and flourishes near fuchsias
forget-me-not fame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Nicole Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:02 PM
So beautiful. "as they move to dream music, rose petals whirl." I can see this image in my mind. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations Evelyn, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buehler Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 9:08 PM
I extend my heartfelt thanks to you, Brandy. Hugs :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Love four o’clock fragrance! Congratulations on POTD!
Buehler Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Deepest thanks, Kim.
Magdalinos Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 10:16 PM
Hello Evelyn,Congratulations,beautiful haikus!! Have a blessed evening!!
Buehler Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Thank you very much, Theophilos. :)
DiMino Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations, Evelyn; very tranquil and beautiful. Well deserved POTD.
Buehler Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:37 PM
Thank you very much for your joy inducing comments, Joe. :)
Conn Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Thank you soooo much Chris.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 7:16 PM
A lovely floral trio of Haiku’s Evelyn, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day. Belle
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 7:37 PM
Your lovely words are most appreciated, Belle. Evelyn
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations on POTD.
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 10:23 PM
you are one awesome writer my friend.
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Warmest thanks, Eve. :)
Kitchin Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:39 PM
Evelyn, love your floral haiku collection, congratulations on POTD!
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Thank you for your warm congratulations, Tania. :)
M  Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations Evelyn on POTD!! Debx
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Thank you very much, Deb. Hugs and blessings.
Bowring Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Dear Evelyn with great pleasure I am congratulating you for POTD with this delightful triple Haiku. Such beautiful, poetic lines and so exquisite’ as they move to dream music’ ‘forget me not fame’. What gorgeous imagery and so well described that you can almost smell the flowers! A wonderful creation my sweet, poetic friend. Loved it. Hugs and applause xx
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, dear friend, for the thrill of your uplifting remarks. Reading them is such a pleasure. Blessings and hugs. :)
Kauffman Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Well, Judy, not sure how my comment to Joe ended up on your page - the cyber gremlins are at it again! But, that being said, I am so delighted for your POTD honor. This haiku string is sheer colorful delight spinning through the afternoon garden. Floral beauty on tiptoes set in a joyful scene! With all of the ugliness we are seeing and experiencing your lovely words reminds us to inhale peace and loveliness at every opportunity. Blessings to you, my friend. Thank you!
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Mix ups do happen from time to time. Joe is a marvelous writer. Thank you very much for your joyous, gratifying comments, dear friend. All good wishes.
Kauffman Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Amen and Amen! Words with impact, Joe, with powerful lessons to be learned, remembered and put into action every day! If each of us strives to be people of "good will" what amazing things we, through God, could achieve and would see! Congratulations on your POTD! A wonderful honor for a wonderful poem. Blessings to you!
Anaya Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 8:39 AM
I was just thinking about you, and how I haven't made time to read your epic poems and love of jazz music vid's. on Saturday's. Congratulations on your POTD Evelyn Judy Buehler! Always a pleasure to read your colorful imagery and insight of beautiful flowers and wonderful stories. Enjoy your day xhugs ~Anaya
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:40 PM
Your words thrill and delight, Anaya. Thank you so very much. hugsxx
Baker Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 8:38 AM
I enjoyed reading your fine triple Haiku, Evelyn. I can imagine you dancing around enjoying all the scents and beauty. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition my friend. Bill
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:38 PM
So glad you enjoyed the poem, Bill. Thank you for your kind words of congratulations. Warmest regards.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely flower write. Have a blessed day in your pretty garden.....................
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Paula. I hope your day is lovely, too. :)
Mcintosh Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Lovely, Congrats on POTD. Much love and prayers, Gina
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Thank you, dear Regina. Blessings and hugs.
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Back to say congrats on winning potd!
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Many thanks, Karen. :)
Pandit Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Evelyn. Enjoy your special day today.
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Thank you for the smiles, my friend. :)
Meadows Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:32 AM
A beautiful poem!! Congratulations on your POTD. Well written.
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Warmest thanks, Jeanette. :)
Gentile Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful POTD! Your lovely tribute to all things flowers is lovely! Enjoy your day!
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Deepest thanks, Mike. I hope your day is nice, too.
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:12 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Thank you so much for your kind congratulations, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Williams Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:05 AM
An excellent choice for POTD. Congratulations Evelyn..Hugs
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:15 PM
I appreciate you lovely comments so much, Maria.
May Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:04 AM
Wonderful write Evelyn, Congrats on POTD
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Many thanks, Joseph. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 2:25 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, A lively set of haikus that makes the heart so joyous. Blessing.
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Heartfelt thanks for your warm words of congratulations, my friend. Kindest regards.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 1:44 AM
What a better waltz than the flowers one?.... MANY CONGRATULATIONS on the POTD Evelyn. Awesome set of haikus. Happy awarded day...! Blessingsxxx
Buehler Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind thoughts, Maria. hugs xxx
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