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Wally Needs To Lighten Up a Little

We went on a Lampoon vacation
Drove damn near across our great nation
We found Wally World
The rides made me hurl
(Can’t repeat Wally’s exclamation)

Submitted for: Carolyn’s contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:51:00 PM

Hi Tim,, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2014 2:14:00 AM

Well this made me laugh which means it is a great Limerick, as I usually don't get the humor. Thanks for that Tim and Big Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2014 8:42:00 AM

Great wit Tim! Congrats on huge win!

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/27/2014 6:31:00 AM

"This is no longer a vacation... It's a quest! A quest for fun!" Well done! Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2014 12:58:00 AM

Hilarious and witty one, congrats on the win, Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2014 6:34:00 PM

Another witty limerick!! I've been enjoying these entries! Congrats on a merited win, Tim. // paul

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/26/2014 4:26:00 PM

congratulations on a great win. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 1:47:00 PM

I Just knew this one should do well. BIG congrats, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2014 1:39:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/26/2014 6:56:00 PM

Many thx for your kind words, dear Sara. Hope all is going well at your house - bob h

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/26/2014 11:48:00 AM

Dear Tim, I can still recall your limerick on "Jaws" and now you found another great movie to make us laugh. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/26/2014 4:36:00 PM

Thank you my dear and cherished friend...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2014 8:35:00 PM

oh heck, why couldn't i have just done wally world?? You did it so well and looks like you breezed through it!! Awesome.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2014 1:47:00 PM

Oops - let me know when it's fixed. Send a regular email. You can just hit reply on the one I sent to you.

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/25/2014 2:16:00 PM

Done! Thanks again

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2014 1:46:00 PM