Tim Ryerson Poet Limerick

Wally Needs To Lighten Up a Little

We went on a Lampoon vacation
Drove damn near across our great nation
We found Wally World
The rides made me hurl
(Can’t repeat Wally’s exclamation)

Submitted for: Carolyn’s contest

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Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2014 at 12:51 PM Hi Tim,, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA

Connie Marcum Wong July 29, 2014 at 2:14 AM Well this made me laugh which means it is a great Limerick, as I usually don't get the humor. Thanks for that Tim and Big Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2014 at 8:42 AM Great wit Tim! Congrats on huge win!

Roy Jerden July 27, 2014 at 6:31 AM "This is no longer a vacation... It's a quest! A quest for fun!" Well done! Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta July 27, 2014 at 12:58 AM Hilarious and witty one, congrats on the win, Tim

Paul Callus July 26, 2014 at 6:34 PM Another witty limerick!! I've been enjoying these entries! Congrats on a merited win, Tim. // paul

Joyce Johnson July 26, 2014 at 4:26 PM congratulations on a great win. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2014 at 1:47 PM I Just knew this one should do well. BIG congrats, my friend.

Sara Kendrick July 26, 2014 at 1:39 PM Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara Robert L. Hinshaw July 26, 2014 at 6:56 PM Many thx for your kind words, dear Sara. Hope all is going well at your house - bob h

Carolyn Devonshire July 26, 2014 at 11:48 AM Dear Tim, I can still recall your limerick on "Jaws" and now you found another great movie to make us laugh. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn Tim Ryerson July 26, 2014 at 4:36 PM Thank you my dear and cherished friend...

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2014 at 8:35 PM oh heck, why couldn't i have just done wally world?? You did it so well and looks like you breezed through it!! Awesome.

Carolyn Devonshire July 25, 2014 at 1:47 PM Oops - let me know when it's fixed. Send a regular email. You can just hit reply on the one I sent to you. Tim Ryerson July 25, 2014 at 2:16 PM Done! Thanks again

Carolyn Devonshire July 25, 2014 at 1:46 PM Tim, please check your regular mail. You have a typo in the title. I won't post the winners until you have a chance to fix it. Best wishes, Carolyn

Tim Smith July 25, 2014 at 8:55 AM Sorry folks parks closed....lol. An all time classic.... Cheers

Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 4:37 AM LOL. Good luck in the contest Tim. Hugs Jan xx