Walls of Years

I am but four walls painted purple, I remember that day, the girl of raven hair, standing on a ladder painting me. I was laughing because her hair had streaks of purple, and she was dappled all over with dots of me, you see. The next few days, I was left alone to dry in quietude, then came the antique furniture and mauve drapery. Art work was attached to me in hues of purple, my whole essence was lovely and I rested peacefully. I liked to watch the girl dance around in her pretty dresses, looking at herself in the ornate, oval mirror, so pretty. Often she would sit at her desk writing in her diary, with tears in her eyes, head bowed, I was full of sympathy. One day, she wore an elegant dress of white lace, she danced and pranced around the room smiling happily. I was so happy for her, but not exactly sure why I was, but I should have been sad because she was leaving me. Years my door remained closed, the furniture covered, then one day, an old lady walked in holding the hand of girl. She stroked the raven hair of the girl she called granddaughter, and told her, "this is the room where I used to dance and swirl." _______________________________ September 4, 2012 Poetry/Personification/Wall of Years Copyright Protected, ID 09-418-309-04 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France For the Standard contest, If These Walls Could Talk, sponsor, Black Eyed Susan, Judged 09/17/2012 Third Place
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Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your win Constance. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 6:07 AM
Oh, this was so sad. brought tears to my eyes. Congratulations on your win. lee
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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September 18, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Beautiful poem and story you told. Congrats on your lovely win! Hugs
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 9:45 AM
It would be okay for walls to talk if they only had tales like this lovely to tell. Congratulations Constance and hope you are doing well. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 8:12 AM
CONGRATS CONSTANCE ON AN EXEMPLARY WRITE AND WIN MY DEAR FRIEND ..ALWAYS A RARE TREAT TO ABSORB YOUR MAGICAL WORDS AND THOUGHTS LUV .. HOPE U R FEELING WELL ..
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 9:14 PM
wow, the word for this one is "precious" I really love this one, Constance. I can see you in a room such as this one! congrats in the contest.
Wellington Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:28 PM
Congrats Constance..your poem deserves this win! One love. Joy Wells
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September 17, 2012 at 12:29 PM
a combination of mystery and nostalgia, dearie... bouquets for you and warm congrats on your stunning win!..:) huggs!
Poet Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Very good approach here by you Constance!Beautiful poem.Congrats on your win.
Susan Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your #3 win in my contest! I liked how you covered the years - the happiness - sadness- then happy again/hopeful. I felt the full of range of emotions in this :)
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September 17, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your terrific win Constance xx
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September 17, 2012 at 10:27 AM
CONSTANCE, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 7:53 AM
A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Constance. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 4:06 AM
magnificently penned my dear friend .. the walls r alive with memories of this era of life .. a spectacular entry.. winning wishes Constance .. our collab is a big success from our comments .. so happy ..
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 3:09 PM
loved this beautiful write, Constance
Horsman Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 10:44 AM
Wonderful poem, full of love, but that last stanza dear Constance is a classic, so you, so much like you.
Sivey Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 9:40 AM
Wow the elegance of this write is truly astounding my friend! I am so enthralled by the glamor you put onto this incredible write! I love the touch of the swirlier coming back with her granddaughter, that was awesome! This is a fantastic write my friend, Great Work!!
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September 4, 2012 at 9:36 AM
Fantastic start of this write my friend...keep up the awesome work!
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