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Walks Venus

Walks Venus Walks where a planet should be, Now called the asteriod belt, Venus came late to our system, Did she destroy planet x svelte, Mars was battered on her northern hemisphere, 3 klilometres deep are the scars, Now has a circular orbit, And life on the planet, expelled from Mars, Venus is not in ancient star maps, Recently she came to us, possibly disturbed our orbit, comet tail Venus, spins backward thus, 10,000 years ago, she changed the seasons, Ice age, pole change, water rushed, Noah’s flood could be the reason, Atlantis sank, stone age, nonplussed . Don Johnson 22-sep-11

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Date: 9/22/2011 5:05:00 PM
What a wonderful write Don! I love poems about the solar system, very informative! Outstanding work!!
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Date: 9/22/2011 9:02:00 AM
Great Don. My kind of story. Tony
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