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Walking to School

School was a mile and a half walk from home, across roadways, busy streets and railway lines and through parklands patrolled by swooping magpies in spring. We thought nothing of it when it was pouring with rain or hot as hell. Six year olds walked a gauntlet of risk back then. Memory can almost recall an image of each house along that daily route, the smells that gathered in the doorways of shops, the reek of urine wafting out of a laneway beside the pub and, still mapped upon the mind, where fruit trees overhung a fence and were good for a seasonal treat. Each step taken fed the senses with familiar signposts marking the way between home and the schoolyard gate. Time has passed into a more protective and yet more dangerous age. Children are shuttled to school by parents in bull bar protected SUV's and buses with flashing lights. Souls have become more brittle under the weight of an insidious world, perhaps no better or worse off than when I walked to school and danger hid in places where the senses could go. In my day, bully boys had names and were dressed in uniforms. Now, it is in the odorless corridors behind digital screens and in promises where lives tick away in the sterile waiting rooms of mortgaged dreams.

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Date: 3/3/2024 4:57:00 PM
you've masterfully described the transition of a simpler, safer time to an unsafe, chaotic, and manufactured world where the lines of reality are blurred. I felt twinges of sadness for what you call 'brittle souls'. That's the perfect image for folks who've only known or experienced an insidious world. I feel fortunate to have grown up when I did...the last three lines captured it all. Faving this one. Have a splendid evening. Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/5/2024 3:14:00 AM
Thanks Sara, soaked up your kind words. I guess one of the main points of difference between then and now is the growing sense of powerlessness, an inability to identify cause and the confused messaging being aimed at the young. All is grey whereas in my childhood, there was more tonal differentiation. Take care, Paul
Date: 3/3/2024 5:28:00 AM
Dear Paul, your poem is a wonderful reflection on the passage of time and the changing landscape of childhood. Your words evoke vivid memories of a simpler era when the journey to school was a daily adventure filled with sights, sounds, and smells. The contrast between then and now highlights the evolution of society. I love how your nostalgic prose captures the essence of a bygone era while shedding light on the challenges of modern-day childhood. This is such a heartfelt reflection on innocence lost and the passage of time. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/5/2024 3:03:00 AM
Daniel you give honor to the poem by your in depth reading and analysis ....I thank you sincerelly for giving your time to such an exercise, your words are valued . As you commented, a more simple age has given way to an overwhelming complexity and a sense of powerlessness. Tough times. Take care, kind refards, Paul.
Date: 3/3/2024 5:03:00 AM
It's quite wonderful Paul how you conjure images from your life and mind. The re walking of a route is a fascinating pursuit and makes memory seem like something else that runs alongside rather than in the past. We each try to keep the best of how it was for us and protect from the worst but maybe you're right, knowing the enemy isn't as easy but also never was. Brittleness I try to guard against with snippets of wisdom and letting gentle upsets play out. Beautiful poem x
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/5/2024 2:53:00 AM
I am always rumaging memory to retrieve stuff, trying to make the ordinary come alive, let the present speak through the resurrected bones of the old. These days there is too much data inflow, the mind becomes bloated with the unimportant. Hence I like to keep my poetry simple and rooted in things that connect to the experience of being alive. A challenge at times. Thankyou dear DD for your lovely comments and friendship.

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