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Walking the Wrack Line

The quiet rush of the oncoming night, Slanted the evening’s fast fading light. We walk as two, on the long quiet shore, Hoping for sea glass, or trinkets, or more. We walk close together and side by side, To see what we’ll see in the slacking tide. We leave far behind us, the taut daily strife, Walking the wrack line for snippets of life. We find only dead seaweed, laid in rows, But we forge ahead, as one never knows. We keep at our searching, till dark descends, Then melt into the mist, as another day ends.

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Date: 11/15/2023 7:13:00 AM
Thomas, your poem beautifully portrays a tranquil walk along the shore. Your verses paint a vivid picture of the serene setting, inviting the reader to join in the search for sea glass and trinkets. The rhythm of your words mirrors the ebb and flow of the tide, creating a soothing cadence that lingers long after the poem ends. A truly enchanting piece! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:55:00 AM
Great imagery! I feel as though I walked with you.
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