Walking Miles in the Dollar Store

For three hours, I wait.
Is patient the word?
A friendly face, too soon?
Still, when your old
you have no time

for particulars, need to tell
your story to who will listen;
and walk miles and miles
of aisles in the dollar store
where your friend
never goes; and you tell

her about the rose;
and eventually
Mary and Martha meet,
having never crossed paths
before, and
probably nevermore this side
of heaven; and
the painstaking path
has been blocked.

For three hours I wait
to retreat, as
my husband texts me -
I mean I’m not that far away,
yet, time seems to travel.

Now, I’m quite familiar
with the products sold.
I bought a plastic box
(for a wig I used for my sister’s party);
a yellow, smiley face neck pillow,
nail wraps and nonpareils.

The jaunt of longsuffering,
surely was worth my time;
I survived. This was merely
the end of a very long day.
I’ll not bore you
with the unusual beginning.

Back home, I stuffed my face
and watched a show with my
husband. It was after seven.

I will see all of this reel as a real blessing
and be glad I didn’t stand anyone up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Legros Kelley Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 1:56 PM
The dollar store can be such a fun little trip, my daughter loved to go there a few years ago, but since the city has been overtaking the suburbs, traffic has been terrible, the crowds in the stores too, so not much fun for us anymore and I don't go often. You can't beat the prices though! Your evening sounds nice, popcorn and tv with hubby, who could ask for more?
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 6:31 AM
I definately learned what was in it, with the slow pace. My hubby was glad when I got home…lol
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:37 PM
this poem struck a chord with me....there's depth in the simplicity!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Thank you and I so appreciae the reads and comments.:)
Hind Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 11:55 AM
This has so much personality- simply written a whole journey out of small things, enjoyed your depth and poetry <3 it survives
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, sweet poet!
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