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Walking Backwards

People always walk their pet Time in linear leash fashion But their four dimension-legged friend don’t always lead them the right bipedal way When you take a trip down Memory Dove Lane, do you often mourn over your past mistakes? Or do you walk the Time backwards, going back the same way ... do you still revel in the foolishness that you did back in the day? Drunk time spent pissing on the fire hydrant, hangover time chasing party time up a tree High-flying old parrots with nothing but free time, now trying to re-live their caged youth — Loco pet Coco, just how cuckoo can you be Always looking forward to the next backward birthday, fondly cabaret clutching your pet Time: Dog be chasing cat ... cat be chasing rat ... Rat be chasing the cheese ... cheese be set in the trap ... Swiss cheese memory — holes in the head of a turned around, backwards looking cap Like a blind mice of senility crawling infant-ly into a death trap that be ready to snap, at the tale end of it all

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Date: 2/25/2018 9:03:00 AM
Wow man you just made me walk time backwards to see which one i am in your poem. Thank you Freddie for this profound piece and personal fave.
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:41:00 PM
Love this poem, Freddie! Yes..I look back too often that I sometimes trip into the future. I especially enjoyed "to the next backward birthday" and I wish people would lose that backwards cap. Awesome write.
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Date: 2/23/2018 1:28:00 PM
Wow Freddie. This is a creative poem and gets the reader thinking. I like the line Memory Dove Lane :)
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