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Walking and Running With You

Walking too close to you brings my desire to a maximum, Walking too far away from you brings my sanity to a halt, Walking in front of you makes me want to turn around, Walking behind you makes my weakness your fault. Running away from you, oh no, it would never happen, Running toward you has always been my past time, Running beneath you makes me want to grab you closer, Running with you always ends with our bodies entwined. Date Written: January 17, 2016

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Date: 1/25/2016 12:16:00 PM
This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/25/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Funom very much for your kind words...:) *smiles*
Date: 1/21/2016 5:26:00 PM
excellent write Laura...lovely
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/25/2016 12:45:00 PM
Thank you WS :) *smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/20/2016 8:32:00 AM
ohh, such a winsome, charming write, laura... love the energy of your words!..huggs
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/20/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Nette, I appreciate you popping in and writing sweet comments on my poems :) *smiles*-luloo
Date: 1/18/2016 2:02:00 PM
Great love poem..I am glad that Ichose this one to read today..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in your contest..I am honored to have my work in the list..Sara
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/18/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Sara :) You deserved your placement *Smiles* Be blessed -luloo
Date: 1/17/2016 9:30:00 PM
I love this!!! Relate, oh yepper ... CayCay
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/18/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thank you sweet lady CayCay!!! *smiles*

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