Walk With Me Always - the Egg Timer Style

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~ Walk With Me Always ~ ( Egg Timer ) Come with me Darling And hold my hand Walk always With me Love Love With me Walk always And hold my hand Come with me Darling And hold me so tight Give me a kiss Two three four I want More More I want Two three four Give me a kiss And hold me so tight Come with me my love We'll dance love kiss Neath the moon All night Long Long All night Neath the moon We'll dance love kiss Come with me my love Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2017 January.26.2018 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~ Author's Notes: The 'Egg Timer' is a poetry form or style created by Erich J. Goller.

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Beejadhur Sewumber

Date: 1/27/2018 5:10:00 PM

Wonderfully written on love theme. Well styled and written. my friend.

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/27/2018 7:13:00 AM

Absolutely delightful dear friend! Unique presentation... loving theme! Enjoyable! Love Happy Jack xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/27/2018 10:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Jack, for stopping by and commenting on my love poem:)) I deeply appreciate it! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/26/2018 6:59:00 PM

There's happiness in this poem...a skip of joy to it...All the best Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/27/2018 10:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Arturo, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem:)) I deeply appreciate all your kindness my friend!All the best to you too Arturo!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:))D