Waking Up To the Morn

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Upon waking up from restful slumber, as we be thus in the in-between stage, tranquil peace engulfs us from deep under, with no ego thoughts trying to upstage, we allow bliss currents, to swathe form cage. In time stretched stillness, we meld with our soul, feeling a heightened joy making us whole, as magnetic bliss fills all voids within, there remaining for us no earthy goal, ecstasy unbound felt upon our skin. 02-September-2021

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/2/2021 4:08:00 PM

OH, me thinks we are like-minded spiritually. I view EGO is an acronym for "Edging God Out" just as the spiritual depth in your poem expresses. This deserved more than one reading and was totally a gem of eternal, shining truth. Be golden ... CayCay

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/2/2021 6:46:00 PM

Thanks for your comments, CayCay! Your ego acronym is perfect, essentially ego is nothing other than the mistaken belief (delusion) that we are thus limited mind-body and not God essence unbound.