Waking Up In 1942

Let’s go back in time to the nineteen fifties, Melanie suggested.
How about 1942? Her best friend, a more knowledgeable Tillie protested. 
So they woke up in a room that was covered with pink roses, all girly.
Their makeup was in place upon awakening, and hair totally curly.

They looked like they had stepped out of a Rita Hayworth movie.
This is kind of nice, Melanie had to agree. It truly feels quite groovy.
How long do we stay? Tillie asked, bounding out of a rose covered bed.
Until we have had breakfast, or at least lunch, Melanie said.

What about our children? Our husbands? Our jobs and our life? 
Tillie giggled about them on their own. She was a most peculiar wife.
Maybe they will take them to their mothers. This room is a dream!
She was settling down for a happy rest. Felt like a cat with new cream.

Are we asleep Melanie asked? She was worried about the frilly lace.
She was concerned about the time travel. Could they shelter in place?
Tillie blinked her eyes, eliminating her friend from her beautiful dream.
Settling down to enjoy the comforts of grandma’s house in a steady stream.
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Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Three cheers for Tillie!!! As for Melanie, well... And even more cheers for the poet, Caren!!!!!! Great write, my friend! :) gw (Soup mail, please)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Thank you so much
One Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Great sentimental write..
Krutsinger Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Thank you very much.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:23 AM
This is beautiful nostalgia :) I love it. You have such a amazing imagination that I'm always surprised and uplifted by your verses! They're so original and genuine, showing a vulnerable, childlike side. I do love them. God bless you
Krutsinger Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Thank you very much Regina. I am a child counselor, so I keep in touch with child me.
May Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:22 AM
An enchanting story Caren, Very nicely told..
Krutsinger Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate it.
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