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Waking Up

i know it was a nightmare to you but it's one of my happiest dreams cleaning out the basement just use four i don't know if you understand or if you ever will hell do i do want to know i looked for you as far as i could go i looked for anything just a glimpse of hope so girl don't look back i got the basement alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/27/2009 4:26:00 AM
nice write. enjoyed reading it. loved it. always, cherica lynn <3
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Date: 6/14/2009 1:13:00 AM
aww what a good poem, I understand what you mean, thanks for your kind comments on my poem dentist footle, God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/13/2009 8:19:00 AM
WHAT DO YOU REALLY MEAN, WELL, you've got what it takes to be a good poet. keep writing but check your punctuations. you are great. keep writing. change the form of this piece to free verse
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