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If you listen, 
the morning talks to you
through its white silence.
There is a depth here that falls away 
into prayer, a stillness that seems
to veneer an even deeper still.

My footprints sink into the fresh snow 
and mark it with a kind of sacrilege,
scoring a pristine glaze with
a clumsy presence.
All this undisturbed loveliness 
is already beginning to melt.

I stand and feast
on the moment taking in 
as much as I can. By this afternoon, 
the snow will be gone.
I am learning to find joy 
by letting go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/5/2025 4:33:00 PM
aahhh....the secret to life......'how well did you live....love....and learn to let go' .....len
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/7/2025 5:49:00 AM
Wise comments SB...thankyou for taking time to read the poem and for your comments. Appreciated. Cheers, Paul

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