Waking To a New Day

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Fiery Flames of mornings early light,
                             A lonesome bird caws, then soars in flight

                          An illuminated sky, streaked in strains of grey,
                               Harkening the advent of another day

                             Phantom clouds pause, slowly passing by;
                          Wistful trees, shedding their seasonal display,
                                        Winter, is not far away

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Date: 11/13/2021 6:21:00 PM
Feel as if hearalded into a new dawn. The cusp between autumn and winter, painted brilliantly in lovely lines. Really enjoyed this wonderful piece.... Paulette!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/15/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Valsa, it was an inspirational morning, perfect to inspire my piece. Thanks for stopping by my page. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/11/2021 9:09:00 PM
Hi Paulette, A wonderful poem depicting amazing morning skies and the seasonal change heading towards winter. I enjoyed reading your "Waking to a new day" Cheers Anne :-)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/12/2021 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Anne, it was such an inspiring sunrise! Thanks for stopping by. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/9/2021 9:00:00 AM
I love this. Awesome write. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Regina, the beauty of this particular sunrise was so inspiring~glad you enjoyed it too! Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/7/2021 9:28:00 PM
Paulette, good job of conveying the emotions of a season passing.
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Date: 11/8/2021 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Mike, a sunrise like this one is so inspirational. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/6/2021 3:17:00 PM
Dear poet friend, I can see your tender heart doesn't skip a beat when it comes to the changing of the season, I am sure we will have a nice warmly winter, thankyou for sharing your talent today, God bless you .
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Date: 11/6/2021 4:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Mystic Rose....you too have a tender heart ..."it take one to know one"! Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/6/2021 8:52:00 AM
Very nice depiction of the scenery..
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/6/2021 12:33:00 PM
Thank you....the sunrise was awesome. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/6/2021 5:43:00 AM
The imagery here is great. I liked your poem.very well penned. Blessings
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Date: 11/6/2021 12:34:00 PM
Thank You Paghunda, It was a magnificent and inspiring sunrise. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/4/2021 3:41:00 PM
Paulette, I loved your poem. I read the poem while looking at the picture. How well you capture the moment, Very peaceful. Blessings ~ Debra
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/5/2021 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Debra, it was quite an amazing sunrise....so inspirational. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/2/2021 5:51:00 PM
I want to be there! It sounds so lovely. I like your description of the clouds as phantom clouds. I could picture your poem as I read it, so pretty.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/2/2021 6:18:00 PM
Hi Marikate, Thank you for stopping by my page~glad you were able to feel as though you were there~a sunrise like this is so inspiring. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/1/2021 1:21:00 PM
this is really really nice. Such a lovely picture.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/2/2021 2:42:00 PM
Thank You Andrea, Glad you enjoyed it. It truly was an amazing sunrise! Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/1/2021 11:36:00 AM
Such a fine piece fitting so well to the picture Paulette, good imagery with good word choice. Blessings,Gordon
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/2/2021 2:44:00 PM
Thanks Gordon. Glad you enjoyed it....That particular sunrise was a poem in itself. Glad I could capture it with my words. (My friend took the photo). Blessings, Paulette
Date: 11/1/2021 10:41:00 AM
Such a beautiful write apt for the picture dear Paulette...Hugs...~Ani
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Anitha, it was an amazing sunrise. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/30/2021 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful Paulette. Love the pic. It reminds me of the lovely sunrises we get here in Alberta. Spectacular. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/31/2021 8:19:00 AM
Hi Judy, The pic is a poem in itself~The impact of the rising sun is so inspirational! Glad you enjoyed it! Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/30/2021 12:35:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Paulette; great photo as well. Have a beautiful Day!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/30/2021 12:38:00 PM
Hi Joe, Thank you....It was certainly an awesome sunrise~I was compelled to paint it with words. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/30/2021 8:55:00 AM
Lovely description and picture on this well written poem. Looks the same here as we now wait for winter here on the prairies. love phyl
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Date: 10/30/2021 12:35:00 PM
HI Phyl....Thanks for stopping by my page~Autumn is such a bittersweet time of year, isn't it? Glad you enjoyed my poem~the sight of this sunrise called to me to paint this picture with words. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/29/2021 1:33:00 AM
What an amazing poem, Paulette. Unfortunately I rarely see the sun rise.
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Date: 10/29/2021 8:29:00 AM
Hi Victor, Well you are seeing one here! It truly is an amazing site to witness....I hope this fills the void! Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/28/2021 7:17:00 PM
Delightful portrayal of a new day. The imagery really resonates, Paulette. Thanks, Gershon
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/29/2021 8:30:00 AM
Hi Gershon, Thank you. This was a sunrise that made me awestruck ~ glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/28/2021 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful painting of a late autumn sunrise. Love your description of the sky and the melancholy birds and trees setting a perfect mood as winter looms.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/28/2021 4:39:00 PM
Once again, Thank you for your encouraging comments. Glad I was able to set the "perfect mood as winter looms". Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/28/2021 2:49:00 PM
Oh, I love this. Well written ! Also the photo looks very similar to one I took on my street once. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 10/28/2021 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I appreciate your stopping by ~ It certainly was a magnificent sight, as you experienced yourself! Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/28/2021 11:40:00 AM
Enjoyed, but I hope winter continues to stay away! Aloha!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/28/2021 4:10:00 PM
LOL...unfortunately winter is not far way....but the beauty of autumn mornings, like this one makes takes the sting out of what is to come. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/28/2021 10:41:00 AM
What a beautiful piece. Not only do the words match the beautiful sky, but the combination of beauty and reflection of such is wonderful. Thank you Paulette for sharing...Blessings Michael Rene
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/28/2021 4:12:00 PM
Hi Michael, thank you for your kind words~truly, seeing this remarkable sun rise was inspirational. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/28/2021 8:13:00 AM
Nice thoughts on seasonal change, Paulette...Delice
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/28/2021 9:16:00 AM
Hi Delice, it is a very colorful time of year, isn't it? Thanks for stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/27/2021 5:14:00 PM
Lovely, descriptive and emotive imagery of the season, Paulette! Very beautifully written! :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/28/2021 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Laura, your comments warm my heart~after reading some of your work ,I know how imagery is your strength~I am so delighted you found it descriptive and moving. Blessings, Paulette
Date: 10/27/2021 3:56:00 PM
Hello Paulette Calasibetta, Right! winter is not far away. Soon those clouds will be releasing the snow. It is not my fav. season. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/28/2021 11:17:00 AM
Hello Pauletta, i do enjoy the autumn days. the colours of the leaves in different shade of colours. Hugs.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/27/2021 4:22:00 PM
HI Darlene, thanks for stopping by....Winter is not my favorite either....but these autumn days are breathtaking. Blessings, Paulette
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