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Waking Dream Written By Cody

the wind blows your hair and the moonlight shines off your skin, the cold wind blows around us as im staring into your starlit eyes and yet inside i burn like the fires of the pit, longing to kiss your lips of crimson and feel your velvet skin...my eyes open and stare at the ceiling and my heart cracks in my chest...just a dream to cling to until the i hold you in my arms. cody j

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/8/2010 2:47:00 PM
This is a dream of so many...such vivid imagery Cody...filled with romanticism, passion, and paints a clear visual in my mind! Thanks so much for sharing! Continue to write as it frees the soul! Have a wonderful day~Mary
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Date: 1/8/2010 2:42:00 PM
I envy your skills. You are literary polish, that's for sure.
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Date: 1/8/2010 1:41:00 PM
Wow so very Romantic dear friend,I love it..Charma
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Date: 1/8/2010 1:01:00 PM
nicely penned code man, keep writing and sharing!!
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Date: 1/8/2010 12:20:00 PM
Lovely romanticism in your lines Cody and a dream shared by so many of us ... wonderful words of romantic expression..enjoyed .. blessings...luv... Linda-Marie.
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Date: 1/8/2010 12:10:00 PM
lol im on my grandmas account thank you moses she put this up here for me its my writing i write about one a day and let her post them on here if she wants to its nice to get good responses to my work
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Date: 1/8/2010 9:09:00 AM
This is an awesome and moving write Sara. Written with such passion. The passion that dwells inside the soul center of Love itself. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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