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Wake Up-Fulton

B U D D I N G S U N S E T S A W A K E N S F U L F I L L S P R I N G S M O R N I N G S H O W E R S MY FIRST ATTEMPT

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Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 10/14/2008 2:59:00 PM

Impressive! Visually and poetically stimulating. Thanks!

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/14/2008 9:24:00 AM

Simply lovely, the imagery pops on this write. Love the format as well. Michael

Constance La France

Date: 10/13/2008 4:18:00 PM

Hello...first attempt... pretty darn good... lots of good fultons written for the contest... going to be difficult to judge... thanks for your comment on my poem ... soft like mittens.. much appreciated..constance

James Foulk

Date: 10/13/2008 10:18:00 AM

your first attempt was a great poem, i love these shape poems, so different.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/13/2008 9:51:00 AM

Your first attempt is a wonderful beginning. I love your work Deneen. The poem is strong, and it captures the mood very well. Its very vivid...I can see it all.

George Anos

Date: 10/12/2008 4:48:00 AM

A very nice first attempt! In a way, heartening and wakeful! Brgds. George

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/12/2008 4:19:00 AM

Deneen - Great job - Very light and uplifting - Good morning and have a great Sunday - God Bless

Jay Johnson

Date: 10/11/2008 9:27:00 PM

Dee you pulled it off in seven words. Your well on your way in the style of HAIKU. #1 fan

Lena W

Date: 10/11/2008 7:50:00 PM

I like it, very refreshing. Great first attempt. Lena