Wake Our Dawns As True Beautiful Flightless Angels

Wake Our Dawns As True Beautiful Flightless Angels

Sweet small offerings I give to you
Till your hands say a fine hello
The months wear thinly our hungers
I can almost hear your voice
Standing in the valley of abstinence
Nights peering into blasting moonlight
Out of my deep loving heart
Flows great winds of sheer desire
I pause, living for your breath
You that make this dear world spin
With kisses born to forever gift
Soon you may live for each other's breath
We wake our dawns as true beautiful flightless angels
Your tender heart fluttering for more
Of our nights on the lush green veranda
Our hugs that beg don't ever let go
You my darling, are the cool winds of love
And I the brave sentry of our journeys
I bring you little things anew
Until your tiny fingers learn to hold
Nothing can our true love defeat
For its truth that is Heavenly sent
And we are together deeply united
Our love, the mountain that shall never fall.

Robert J. Lindley, Verse
May 13th, 1972

Note: May 14th,1972
""To you darling I swear my love and everything.""

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/4/2023 12:14:00 PM
Dear Robert. Hello. This is poetry in the truest form and essence starting with your title to which you never strayed. This is one of those entries that must be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Excellent work. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. May this day find you well. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 9/24/2023 5:32:00 PM
You my darling, are the cool winds of love. Beautiful.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/24/2023 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Iwas 18 years old when I wrote this one 51 years ago.... And yes, I am 69 now. God bless you...
Date: 9/21/2023 2:51:00 PM
Ahhh, young love. So naive, so fresh, so exciting. Rarely lasts though, as we both know, right? Well done
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/21/2023 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Yes everything was new back then. I was wild and very young and tried so many new things. Girls were one of those things. Here I am 51 years later and still I cannot figure out the female mind. God bless you.
Date: 9/21/2023 9:58:00 AM
wow robert this is so beautiful and romantic, you are so so gifted in your creativity in your romantic poems are amazing - i struggle big time with romantic poems, much prefer humour:-) hugs jan xx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/21/2023 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. I was very young when I composed this one. Romanticism in poetry was big back then. God bless you.
Date: 9/21/2023 8:46:00 AM
Deep desires and a heart full of Love, Robert. A very beautiful poem of longing for the time you'd be together forever. Thanks for sharing your soulful poems with us, my dear friend. Have a pleasant week. Bill
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/21/2023 9:19:00 AM
You know Bill I never wrote many Verse poems. This is one of the few that survived. God bless you.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/21/2023 9:12:00 AM
Well, thank you my good friend. I was but a very young lad at the time of writing this one. It is one of the very few Verse poems from my youth that has survived. I posted it as it was first composed without any edits. God bless you, my friend.
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