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Premiere Contest WinnerWake of the Willow

Written: June 30th, 2026 for a contest sponsored by Seth Pina Underneath a veil of midnight choke, A peaceful recluse is drifting loose. Hungry roots in ghostly boots, As blood-red clay morphs to gray The winter cries from weeping skies, Heavy prayers distilled tears. A gleam in moonlight, a dream in sight, The stars have bled where breath is dead. Its sinewed trunk is deeply sunk, Through ruined soil where shadows coil. Raw winds can snap a broken jaw, As trees run deep to hide a sleep. Most sorrow a faded ghost now, Reach out and touch a dead shore. Underneath this clay of black decay, Lost bones will scream and sigh. A dying pulse makes night convulse, Where fading sparks collapse to dark. A requiem blows low with icy glow, As blood seeping scars mock the stars. Confess your sins where spoil begins, For wood can hold the bitter cold. Its trapped voice leaves no choice, When winter’s wind proclaims it sinned.
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Borg Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 1:12 PM
Borg Avatar
July 5, 2026 at 1:14 PM
Line after line, wonderful poetry, Sotto. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Guptar Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this contest with a lovely plea on the sad fate of a willow tree. The poem flows fluidly from beginning to end with beautiful layers of imagery. Particularly loved the closing stanza which calls sinners for sought. Wishing you a bright blessed day.
Peck Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 9:40 AM
This is very beautiful, Sotto. Congrats on your big win! I love willow trees. You did them justice!
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:05 PM
Sotto, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this vividly descriptive piece. Superb use of personification! Janice
George Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 4:18 AM
Excellent composition on decay ! Hearty Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win dear friend.
Jones Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 3:39 AM
Congratulations on your clever thought provoking poem’s first place win dearest Sotto!
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 3:15 AM
Back with congrats, Sotto. What a wonderful trophy win
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 7:53 PM
I agree with Paige . Many amazing lines in this one. It feels very much like personification or the tree is an actual person. I was drawn to your title because I love willow trees
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 12:34 PM
Hungry roots in ghostly boots…the Winter cries…raw winds can snap a jaw…we wonder what is hidden in the roots
Buhagiar Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 2:17 AM
This poem is hauntingly beautiful. The imagery of “blood-red clay morphs to gray” and “trees run deep to hide a sleep” evokes decay and endurance in the same breath. Great poem.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 12:19 AM
Deep rooted thoughts here.
Hind Avatar
June 30, 2026 at 1:40 PM
this is a wonder of a poem, wow, Sotto- amazing lines, so many- in my favs
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