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Wake My Heart - In Forever Autumn

Beauty lies in the day, soft breezes in a powder blue sky ride along the drying leaves. They float and fall like browning snow flakes breathing in the final breath of autumn with their scent heavy musk in the air. The sun rise is later every morning, the sun set dancing in paled ray reflections of green embers fading into the horizon. Wake my heart don't let yourself sleep don't let the days slip too quick away. There go the months and then the years while in a momentary pause a lifetime passes by. Wake my heart rise to the laughter and the tears that slip into time and disappear. The beauty is here, in this very day before your eyes wake my heart and breathe before it all slips into the passage of time. Forever Autumn https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hsCdlX-5UjE

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Date: 10/22/2017 2:31:00 PM
A beautiful message in this write, congratulations on your placement
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Date: 10/22/2017 7:42:00 AM
Congrats DM, for your WIN in the contest with this piece, which speaks deeply to the soul! ;-)
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Date: 10/20/2017 3:34:00 PM
Wow! DM, I like how you did this. The build-up of the piece and the repeated use of the line" Wake up my heart". Made this well written write very good. I found it be a motivational write as well. I think this poem will "wake up the heart " of any one who reads it. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Dm Babbit
Date: 10/21/2017 9:33:00 AM
TY for your comment, wishing you the best in your writings as well.

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