Wake me up

Wake me up with a nice coffee,
wake me up with your breeze,
your kisses and your company.

Such a delightful awakening
to have your warmth, 
your friendship, affection and love.

Wake me up in the cold,
I feel heated in your arms
beyond the stars,
this is my paradise.

These days of troubled waters,
I found myself sailing
in a loved strange sea.
Your boat came into my harbour
and I found a dock
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Date: 11/10/2023 5:21:00 PM
Maria, your poem is a splendid work of art, adorned with exquisite metaphors deserve to be treasured. A beautiful piece of poetry
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/10/2023 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Sotto. I really appreciate these words coming from such a talented poet. I'm just a learner. Thank you for stopping and leave your nice comment. Hugsxxx
Date: 11/10/2023 7:26:00 AM
Your wonderful with free verse Maria. Poetry so gentle, love is precious, I feel it all throughout your poem. The image makes for a great appendage. Thanks for coming to my potd, grateful. Enjoy your day! ~Anaya
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/10/2023 8:15:00 AM
Good afternoon Anaya. I'm very happy for your POTD. Thank you for stopping by and your lovely words. I really appreciate it. Have a great dayxxx
Date: 11/9/2023 6:42:00 PM
Love this sweet comforting poem.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/10/2023 12:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, for stopping and comment. Blessings
Date: 11/9/2023 1:08:00 AM
Ah Maria, so wonderful to be young and taste the fragrance of love. Lovely poem. Blessings.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/9/2023 1:20:00 AM
Good morning Victor. Love doesn't have an age. We always need to love and be loved. Different ways I suppose. Thank you very much for your comment. Have a wonderful dayxxx
Date: 11/8/2023 10:24:00 PM
o maria such a great metaphor, and to be cherished more and more, thanks for the beautidful poem
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/9/2023 12:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Yann. Hugsxxx
Date: 11/8/2023 5:51:00 PM
All boats need a harbour to dock... nice use of analogy.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/9/2023 12:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for commenting. Have a nice day Silent One
Date: 11/8/2023 3:32:00 PM
You are a poet at heart, Maria, and this is a fine sampling for us to enjoy today. A FAV for my list. Write On! my friend in Spain. Bill
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/8/2023 3:39:00 PM
Bill. THANK YOU. I really appreciate your comment. Thanks for your fav too. I' m really attached to you and Sara. My warmth kisses from Spain
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