Notes About The Poem

Wake me up

Wake me up with a nice coffee,
wake me up with your breeze,
your kisses and your company.

Such a delightful awakening
to have your warmth, 
your friendship, affection and love.

Wake me up in the cold,
I feel heated in your arms
beyond the stars,
this is my paradise.

These days of troubled waters,
I found myself sailing
in a loved strange sea.
Your boat came into my harbour
and I found a dock
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:21 PM
Maria, your poem is a splendid work of art, adorned with exquisite metaphors deserve to be treasured. A beautiful piece of poetry
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 6:00 PM
Thank you Sotto. I really appreciate these words coming from such a talented poet. I'm just a learner. Thank you for stopping and leave your nice comment. Hugsxxx
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Your wonderful with free verse Maria. Poetry so gentle, love is precious, I feel it all throughout your poem. The image makes for a great appendage. Thanks for coming to my potd, grateful. Enjoy your day! ~Anaya
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 8:15 AM
Good afternoon Anaya. I'm very happy for your POTD. Thank you for stopping by and your lovely words. I really appreciate it. Have a great dayxxx
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:42 PM
Love this sweet comforting poem.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, for stopping and comment. Blessings
Buhagiar Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 1:08 AM
Ah Maria, so wonderful to be young and taste the fragrance of love. Lovely poem. Blessings.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 1:20 AM
Good morning Victor. Love doesn't have an age. We always need to love and be loved. Different ways I suppose. Thank you very much for your comment. Have a wonderful dayxxx
Rolland Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:24 PM
o maria such a great metaphor, and to be cherished more and more, thanks for the beautidful poem
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 12:58 AM
Thank you so much Yann. Hugsxxx
One Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 5:51 PM
All boats need a harbour to dock... nice use of analogy.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Thank you so much for commenting. Have a nice day Silent One
Baker Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 3:32 PM
You are a poet at heart, Maria, and this is a fine sampling for us to enjoy today. A FAV for my list. Write On! my friend in Spain. Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Bill. THANK YOU. I really appreciate your comment. Thanks for your fav too. I' m really attached to you and Sara. My warmth kisses from Spain
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace