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Waiting To Bleed

Strolls the narrow through sensitivity Life's will cramped as a camped companion Lost and lonely just waiting to bleed Never knowing you're all I need Society, spilt out onto the sidewalks Leading to a nether land One by one and two by two Are you me or am I you Trouble on a tilted plane Discovering nothing at all again Not here today not gone tomorrow Suffer the silence, spill your sorrow Nothing's real but the pain I feel One more sip off the bottle let me steal Chasing hard choices in a soft supple hand Rip out redemption and bury the man

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/21/2017 8:56:00 PM
You are still one of my favourite poets. A stunning piece and a fav for me!
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Date: 1/21/2017 3:54:00 PM
- Mourning in your beautiful lines, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2017 1:45:00 PM
This is an outstanding poem, painful, dark.... and beautiful
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Date: 1/21/2017 11:40:00 AM
Great last line Tim, nice work...
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Date: 1/21/2017 11:38:00 AM
You have outdone yourself Tim, great poem!
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