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Waiting On a Moonbeam

Waiting on a moonbeam ~ Oh come with me a’ strolling on this cool November day Throughout a blushing forest, endless beauty on display Where we will find a pathway winding silent midst the trees Scented sweet of evergreen so soft upon the breeze Beneath majestic branches swaying gaily in the sky Creating waltzing shadows where the two of us now lie While pastel leaves are falling, drifting colors on the ground Forming Autumn’s tapestry with no one else around Holding you so closely as the day comes to an end Moments spent in harmony that twilight whispers send Waiting on a moonbeam soon to glow down from above This cool November evening meant to share with one you love Good night Soupers

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Date: 11/22/2018 8:49:00 AM
you are the king of romantic poems, chris! this one proves it!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so very much Ilene, I am happy you view me that way.
Date: 11/22/2018 8:07:00 AM
A lovely November poem, Chris:)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend for your kindness.
Date: 11/21/2018 10:55:00 PM
Chris, your work is so beautiful.. love reading ..
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve. I am happy you enjoyed my poem. :)
Date: 11/21/2018 9:01:00 PM
There are few things more romantic than strolling through a colorful woodland in fall with the one you love. What a delightful day you have given us and a glimpse into night time as well... Love, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so very much Carolyn for your always kind thoughts and comments. I am so happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/21/2018 8:40:00 PM
The perfect way to end the day -- with a dip in the pool of a poem so cool! Refreshing and wonderful, Chris. Sleep tight, tonight! Season's best! ~ Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 11/21/2018 7:38:00 PM
Cool line: Throughout a blushing forest, endless beauty on display. So romantic, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.
Date: 11/21/2018 7:09:00 PM
Chris, Your imagery always leaves me a bit breathless, in a good way! A Thanksgiving gift a day early as I have work waiting and must go now. Thank you for this gift of poetry that brightened my day. Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie. I am happy that I have brightened your day and hopefully made you smile.
Date: 11/21/2018 6:36:00 PM
Beautifully written, Chris. Happy Thanksgiving :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving
Date: 11/21/2018 6:29:00 PM
What a lovely way to say goodnight, Chris. Thank you.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so very much Line.
Date: 11/21/2018 6:03:00 PM
Nice!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert.

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