Waiting For Your Boss

Waiting for your boss And could I please have more pay Here's two weeks notice

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2018 11:02:00 PM

I like the unexpected juxtaposition of the lines. Brings all such experiences home. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/14/2018 6:32:00 AM

Thank you. Glad you understood which one gave the notice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 4:23:00 PM

You are sure writing a lot today, Caren. let me see just a few more. I was not quite sure I understood this one completely.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2018 7:14:00 PM

hahahahahahaahaha

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/13/2018 9:20:00 AM

That can be frustrating - when your boss waits for you, you are going to hear about it!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/13/2018 7:14:00 PM

I guess this one failed. What I was trying for was the picture of an assertive woman asking for a raise, and the boss not agreeing, and her giving notice.