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Waiting For Santa


I wish I could go back in time to childhood,
      Go back, back to when I was a little girl;
Full of Christmas happiness and joy,
            And the anticipation of Santa coming.

O, how I loved Christmas with my family,
      The cooking and the decorating of the tree;
Mom fussing, grandma dusting and me helping,
           And dad untangling the lights (swearing).

The fireplace was crackling and glowing,
      And outside the snow was beginning to fall;
And us kids were so excited waiting for Santa Claus,
            Mom was telling us Christmas stories.

Oh, on Christmas morning sneaking downstairs,
      And all the presents stacked beneath the tree;
How could mom and dad and grandma be sleeping;
            I checked to see if Santa had eaten his cookies.

Yes, only crumbs remained and his milk was gone,
      How did he always know what I wanted;
It was the miracle of Christmas this adult thinks,
           I still enjoy waiting for Santa on Christmas Eve

You, never know he could really exist for real,
      Just because we cannot see him, he could still be;
That jolly man in a red suit, with white whiskers,
          Riding a red sleigh with his frisky reindeer.

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November 19, 2015

Narrative

For the contest, Story Poem About Santa Claus
Sponsor, Carol Eastman

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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Horne Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 3:47 PM
love this, especially the last stanza - my thoughts, exactly : )
La France Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Jack, thanks for visiting, yes I agree... he could really be !!
Johnson Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:51 PM
One never gets too old to believe. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 4:53 AM
Joyce thanks for visiting and for the congratulations
A  Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 6:19 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:36 PM
Thank you Skat
Gentry Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Congratulations. Well-written poem describing to me what a perfect Christmas would be... Good job!
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Susan, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations ~
Negron Flores Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW.
La France Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Nayda, thanks for the congratulations
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Delightful poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Jan thanks so much for the delightful and the congrats ~
Scars Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Congrats Broken Wings on your win, this is perfect...*smiles*
La France Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:01 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats, the perfect and especially the smiles ~
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Beautiful! Skillfully written... it held my interest from beginning to end. I love the part about Santa and the crumbs from the cookies you left him. SWEET! Best wishes, Keith
La France Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Keith, thanks for visiting, I love those words, beautiful and skillful, and thanks for the nice comment too!!
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