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Waiting For Nightingale To Sing

she livened the world 
with her songs
one day the hippo 
heard her sing
he looked up 
and insulted her beak

she stared at her reflection 
in the water
the hippo was right
she was one ugly fowl
she was one ungifted bird

she swore never to come out again
she swore never to sing again

while she sits still
the world is silent  
waiting for nightingale 
to sing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Chamberlain Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 1:34 AM
Some poems just impact you. They leave an impression or a feeling. Yours did that to me. Nicely written. The world would be a very sad place without the sound of birds.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 2:53 PM
Never insult someone for the way they look, for sadly that’s the reason many lives are took. Belle
Bahr Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 9:45 AM
creative post.
Benson Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 2:32 AM
Thanks Kathy
Lowe Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 9:26 AM
ONE! So lost in darkness is the "moonless world" without the beautiful echoes of the Nightingale! Ah, "Black Patti"...Peace and Love.
Benson Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 2:32 AM
The world sits still waiting for Nightingale to sing. Thanks Millard
Lamoureux Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 3:13 PM
All I can say is wow.
Benson Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 2:30 AM
Thanks ??
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