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Be patient be very very patient after that add more patience then wait and wait and wait and wait and wait become a waiter at least you will be paid to wait When she finally finally arrives give her the biggest smile you possibly possess tell her, "Hello love, you are early and looking very majestically beautiful my sweet! what have you done to your hair love?" since you have waited a century or two or three it's a safe gamble she has, and you my friend will be a big winner. Therefore when you wait and wait and wait be a winner even skeletons smile

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Date: 9/29/2018 10:57:00 AM
Arthur, what a light hearted poem that is so full of wisdom.
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Date: 9/27/2018 1:07:00 PM
Ahh, it is such a lovely and fun write, just wait and wait, but believe me that waiting sure is going to be worth it, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 9/23/2018 3:10:00 AM
oh so funny Art!:-) Are you a masterwaiter lol:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/16/2018 10:28:00 PM
Sometimes patience is golden, I hope you get your just reward, thanks for sharing Arthur
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:51:00 PM
Waiting is sometimes a good thing to get the right person or thing:) Thank you for everything you have done for my husband and me. Hugs dear friend eve
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Date: 9/14/2018 7:33:00 AM
Superbly done my friend...the wait is better than the catch lol...Waiter, there's a woman in my soup lol...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/13/2018 2:58:00 PM
This is funny... I wouldn't feel comfortable next to a skeleton ;p
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Date: 9/12/2018 1:25:00 PM
I sent her express all you have to do is supply the air. Not sure if they got that in Canada ..I know there's no hockey... seriously great write
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Date: 9/12/2018 8:50:00 AM
lOVE iT...I smILED.
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Date: 9/12/2018 8:24:00 AM
Lol! Poetic gold ;) xomo!
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Date: 9/12/2018 4:49:00 AM
"become a waiter at least you will be paid to wait" - that hit me in the funnybone so hard. My heart hurts from the unexpected laugh that came out. This one is so funny!
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Date: 9/12/2018 3:20:00 AM
Believe me I kept laughing while reading your whole poem! On the surface layer it is funny and light but it is rich with ache in depth.. A powerful write, an insightful rendition of one of human nature sufferings.. YES, sometimes we keep waiting for a beautiful soul to death! Brilliant! A FAV. My deepest regards Arthur.
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Date: 9/12/2018 2:12:00 AM
Cute one. I have become a masterwaiter!
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Date: 9/12/2018 2:14:00 AM
LOL for 20 bucks I wont tell her what you just said!!!! LOL
Date: 9/12/2018 1:37:00 AM
And that, my friend, placed a huge smile on my face! Lovely lines, Art.
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