Waiting Alone

She sits alone waiting .... waiting for her lover, today would have been there wedding day. her dreamy lace dress is laid out on her bed. She sits alone. Hair braided to carry her veil yet now she sits with averted eyes, not wanting to speak to anyone. Does he love her she wonders? Will he return? As she sits alone. Where did he go! Why not tell her, he was going away, the pain in her heart is overwhelming why is he hurting her so, will I ever smile again, she ponders as she sits...alone Looks down at her fingers where her wedding band should be. tears start to fall down her face heart broken in pieces.... She waits.... sitting alone.
Penned August 5 2017 For Eve Roper's contest ..she sits alone Syllables 156
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/27/2017 4:32:00 PM
Touching poem! Very well done.
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Date: 8/15/2017 5:42:00 PM
A very sad but well-penned piece, Seren! I can see why it did well in the contest! Nos da
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/15/2017 7:47:00 PM
Diolch yn fawr.........thank you so much...Seren
Date: 8/14/2017 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on the huge win.
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Date: 8/13/2017 7:52:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Seren , very sad, well-crafted poem with, fantastic flow and I like the repeated verse. Congratulations on your win. ~*
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Date: 8/13/2017 6:18:00 PM
Hi Seren, you made me feel her heartbreak. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/13/2017 12:41:00 PM
Seren, this was so beautiful and tearful, I think I would have married her just to make her smile!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/13/2017 7:51:00 PM
I love your comment, Arthur, you should have married her.. you warm my heart..
Date: 8/11/2017 2:33:00 PM
Wow! A very sad and intense. My Italian temper would have weeded him out and make him experience sadness. A great write!
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:44:00 AM
Such sadness Seren. If he was truly meant to be he wouldn't keep her waiting.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/7/2017 3:02:00 PM
Hi Tim...looks like a no go area for her ....thanks for calling by.....Seren
Date: 8/7/2017 4:50:00 AM
WOW Seren!! This is such a powerful interpretation of Eve's Mural, such a beautiful write! I just love your expressions of loneliness and heartache, as they are very in tune with her sadness! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/7/2017 1:02:00 PM
Wow Russell you say the nicest things thank you.Seren
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