Waiting

softly snowflakes gather around idle shovels John G. Lawless 1/16/2018

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Sneha Rv

Date: 1/19/2018 8:42:00 AM

Oh this is a lovely and unique thought; I can see it happening:))

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2018 11:52:00 AM

I like it! great imagery.

John Lawless
Date: 1/19/2018 7:03:00 AM

Thank you Richard, always nice to hear from you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/17/2018 3:37:00 PM

Soft and quiet imagery John. Beautiful.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 1/20/2018 8:26:00 AM

Lol! Yes :))

John Lawless
Date: 1/19/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thanks Susan, the calm before the mad flurry of shovelers....

Judith S

Date: 1/17/2018 1:28:00 PM

No longer idle :) Lovely, gentle monoku. ~Judy

John Lawless
Date: 1/19/2018 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Judith, I often wonder what the shovels talk about while sitting idly....