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Waiting

Waiting Gone is the luster in the hazel eyes That once worshiped you. Gentle olive hills and valleys, Bear spider mapped lines Across white foothill sands and The I that is left misses you. Your Adonis form and chiseled face Have gone where I cannot go, Here neath soft clouds, I hide from you, Awaiting that gentle wind to bear me on Renewed to you as Before the world, we will forever be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/26/2016 4:58:00 PM
Absolutely stunning...I am simply breathless. My best regards, Sunlite. :) john P.s A seven of course!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/26/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thank you for such a great comment.
Date: 8/24/2016 2:12:00 PM
A 7 for this powerful love poem--full of longing, Sunlite. Janice
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