Waiting

Footsteps die away

                                            Like dews falling on the seas

                                                Flowers bloom the bees

                                             Swaddled in a  dark blanket 
 
                                             Waiting for the morning sun

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/6/2015 7:59:00 AM

Enchanting, my dear friend, Rajat

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/6/2015 8:38:00 AM

Thank you for your comment Demetrios. Love Regards>>>rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/6/2015 5:37:00 AM

Hi Rajat! Very beautiful pen Rajat! I enjoyed reading your very nice tanka my dearest friend.Thank you for sharing dear friend. A 7 from me!Wish you a happy new year 2015! Have a very lovely day :) Love and hugs! xxx D."

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/6/2015 7:27:00 AM

Love D. God bless. Rajat