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~ in sunlit orchard a pear of succulent love tumbles unnoticed... ~ Contest "Sensuous Senryu"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/25/2011 4:48:00 PM
that pear seems to be very ripe and tempting. Too bad nobody noticed ! Love the feeling of this one, Rick.
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Date: 6/25/2011 1:11:00 PM
Very well put Rick, best wishes 4 contest..
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Date: 6/25/2011 10:03:00 AM
Hehe that has a very cheeky tinge to it Rick..i like it very much, well done xx
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Date: 6/25/2011 9:55:00 AM
alot said in such few words rick looks like a winner to me for contest even drew smile upon face keep on trucking my friend enjoyed
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Date: 6/25/2011 9:27:00 AM
Powerful Senryu..... Very good..my friend.... Michael
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Date: 6/25/2011 9:24:00 AM
Love it
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