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Waiting - (End Line Word Poem)

WISHING TIME FLIES-(Although we're apart we survive with hope)

The day soon comes when you and ------------I
So eager to see, touch the other’s face ------ Will
Finally meet and not have to---------------------Wait
There will be no more bitter tears ---------------For
I will be at home with ------------------------------You

FORM:  End-Line Word Poem

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2010

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 3/2/2010 4:09:00 PM Dear Audrey, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win In Dane Ann's First Ever " End Line Word " Form Contest I do believe I told YOU this was a Winner for when I read it last it was one of the Best POEMS in this Form Exact in Presentation and Form Thank-YOU for Supporting Dane and my efforts to Establish this New POETRY Form YOU are a Gifted POETESS YOUR Words Linger in My Heart Again Congrats YOUR Liege ALWAYS. ..HG Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/2/2010 11:06:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest Audrey. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Noel Villarosa Date: 3/2/2010 12:47:00 AM Very well said, Audrey. This is deserving. Congratulations to you. (^_^) Noel. Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 3/1/2010 9:56:00 PM Congrats on your win, Audrey! Nice and romantic write. Thank you for your kind compliments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/1/2010 5:11:00 PM Congratulations on your #4 Audrey. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 3/1/2010 4:50:00 PM Congratulations Audrey, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 3/1/2010 4:35:00 PM Congratulations on your win...beautiful poem...Marty Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/1/2010 4:08:00 PM Congrats Audrey my BBF on your winning poem and placement in the first ever End Line Word contest.. such beautiful words .. a treasure of a win so special.. enjoy this moment .. my son leaves tonight at 9 pm EST for his tour of duty in Iraq.. needless to say I am trying to keep cool as I am a wreck right now but wanted to send u well wishes on your win.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/1/2010 2:44:00 PM Great poem, Audrey! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 2/24/2010 9:31:00 PM Dear Audrey, YOU have Written an Excellent " End Line Word " Form. Of all the "POEMS" I have read so far this is in the top 5 I do Hope YOU entered this in Dane Ann's " End Line Word " Contest Thank-YOU so much for YOUR Support and Participation in Dane and my Endeavors to Create this New Form of POETRY YOUR POETIC HEART is alive with in me Thank YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments Muchly Appreciated I learn from YOUR Words YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 2/11/2010 1:07:00 PM Nice poem in this new form that is flowing on the Soup Audrey >> James Login to Reply

David Byrne Date: 2/10/2010 7:11:00 PM Well crafted! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/10/2010 9:36:00 AM I encourage you to continue writing Audrey. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kevin Elmore Date: 2/10/2010 6:50:00 AM excellent poem Audrey. sorry i havent commented on some other ones, i've been busy... but this is a great poem. i like it alot. your friend, Kevin Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/10/2010 3:57:00 AM very beautiful and romantic Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 2/10/2010 3:40:00 AM well done Login to Reply

Kelly Zakerski Date: 2/10/2010 3:01:00 AM Audrey - I LOVE this !!! This is creative and so very touching. Thank you also for the awesome comments on my poems. I checked my email and and soup mail and didn't see anything, accept a link that you commented on my poem. Can you resend the email? Thanks so much and please keep writing, you always do a magnificent job! Kelly Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 2/9/2010 10:32:00 PM This is the first time I have seen this form. You did a great job Audrey. I will have to practice this...good work..Margaret Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 2/9/2010 9:31:00 PM A sweet and well written End line Word Poem. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline. Login to Reply