Waitin for the Bus in the Dark Track

I was going to add a long remix track to a playlist,
A playlist called ‘Waitin For the Bus in the Dark’,
But waitin for the bus in the dark is as tedious as it is -
Making a remix tedious alongside it wouldn’t make sense.

The remix is exciting now -
Anticipating excitement knocking on my eardrums as I wonder how the tune will change.
But next time,
If I play it too soon,
I’ll know.
I’ll just know.
Knowing keeps listening from being curious,
And makes it here we go again.

But “here we go again” are lyrics in an excellent song -
1973 by James Blunt.
Maybe I could add that with the remix to the playlist
And never know which will play first.
Maybe I could add so many songs
That twill be one unmemorable remix
That won’t all play in the time I’m waiting for the bus,
One unmemorable remix that Spotify can shuffle out of order.

The bus I’m waiting for now is too long away
To make it to my trans support group before it ends,
So I’ll make my way home
And bump into an old friend
Who must have started to find me tedious
Or forgotten about me,
Like a song on shuffle that barely plays,
Forgotten how good it is.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bayles Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Terry, such a nice relationship with the song; we want to know it but keep from overplaying it. It's also a nice story about a friendship. I also like the theme of waiting for a bus.
Griffiths Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Exactly that! Glad you like it
Hind Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 7:08 PM
I have played music before waiting on a bus. Congrats on POTD I see!!
Griffiths Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 12:18 PM
It can help regulate you. Thanks!!
Rodgers Avatar
January 8, 2026 at 4:13 AM
Hello Terry, Congrats on POTD. It’s interesting how we try to game our own boredom adding songs just to preserve a sense of surprise only to realize that the real sting is feeling like we’ve become predictable or "unmemorable" to the people we care about. Winter Blessings, Terry, Daniel.
Griffiths Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Hello Daniel, thank you. You have summed my poem up perfectly, and I'm glad you find it interesting. Winter Blessings to you too!
La France Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 10:00 PM
Terry, I enjoyed your poem, well done, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
Griffiths Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Thanks Constance, I'm glad you enjoyed it and am very happy that I got POTD!
Nicole Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 6:48 PM
Music, the melody and moments. I completely understand the magnetic pull between them. : ) Congratulations Terry, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Griffiths Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 12:49 PM
Thanks for the congrats and your thoughtful comment, Brandy!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Waitin for the Bus in the Dark Track" write. Have A Blessed Day With Your Win As You Go Writing Away..............
Griffiths Avatar
January 10, 2026 at 12:51 PM
Thank you so much for the praise, and I'll give you a follow if I haven't already :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 5:24 AM
congrats on your POTD designation
Griffiths Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 12:18 PM
Thanks :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 4:31 AM
Enjoyed your remix poem! Congrats on POTD!
Griffiths Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 12:18 PM
Yay, thank you Kim!
Daniels Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 4:03 AM
Congrats on POTD, Terry. A very interesting & unusual poem. I can feel the tediousness of waiting & thinking about remixing. I adore the last two lines. Happy remixing for rest of 2026. I trust Spotify won’t do out of orders. B blessed.
Griffiths Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 12:20 PM
Hi Ghairo, I agree. I'm glad that you really get the sense of the poem and adore the last two lines. I'll definitely keep using Spotify through all of this year :))
Kitchin Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 3:48 AM
Terry, an interesting poem, congratulations on POTD.
Jones Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:45 AM
Congratulations on your potd honor!
DiMino Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:42 AM
Congratulations, Terry; I saw something special in this one from the get go. Enjoy your POTD!
Cunningham Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:32 AM
An enjoyable read Terry ,congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 1:40 PM
No worries Joe,
DiMino Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 12:08 PM
"Knowing keeps listening from being curious, And makes it here we go again." -- Profound! Love that. I also know nothing. "Who must have started to find me tedious Or forgotten about me, Like a song on shuffle that barely plays, Forgotten how good it is." -- Great poetry! You get a FAV from me.
DiMino Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 1:31 PM
This is just my opinion; I am certainly no authority on anything: Nothing is stagnant, the way I see it. All is in constant change. What happened is gone. Situations are never entirely alike...so past cannot be repeated exactly. Even memory will fail ever so slightly, for I have changed in many large and subtle ways, no longer seeing things totally as I did. The best I can honestly say about anything is, I may have known or knew. Even what happened a couple of seconds ago cannot be repeated or recalled exactly. So, I know nothing. Always learning, renewing, for open to such realization. Less condemning, for benefit of doubt giving grace to others and myself. Trying to see people and situations nearest to the present as is humanly possible. Not living in the past while remaining protectively cognizant of how history can and does similarly repeat itself. Hope I am not just ranting. Again, great POTD!
Griffiths Avatar
January 6, 2026 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much for picking out quotes from my poem that stood out profoundly to you. It means a lot :) But what do you mean you know nothing?
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