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Wait For Me

Do not leave me now I am here by your side and... Heaven will wait dear

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Pratikshya Barik

Date: 2/15/2021 9:18:00 PM

The poem is perfect for valentine's . Loved your writing ?

Carl Nel

Date: 9/29/2012 9:20:00 AM

Ditto! You are very good at writing in this form!

Brian Welsh

Date: 1/4/2012 10:15:00 PM

Heaven did wait for me carol....it looked down upon me ...sent me his/her best soldier and saved me on 5/5/11, I"d like to tell you all about it

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/27/2011 2:17:00 PM

* “Tis As A Kittens Purrr Unto My Heart * Sooo Soft & Sooo Lovely * Hugggs & Kisssses * Sarah.” *

Alisa Cook

Date: 10/22/2011 2:21:00 PM

i like this.

Ky Gatchell

Date: 6/27/2011 7:29:00 AM

truely beautiful

Anne P. Murray

Date: 6/15/2011 9:50:00 AM

What a lovely senryu.

Neha Sharma

Date: 5/26/2011 3:22:00 AM

true in every sense...carol thanks for commenting on my poems its real support for me.

Venetia Crasta

Date: 5/24/2011 9:00:00 PM

I like these words... reminds me of my husband who left me and then departed from this world... i still feel his presence off and on..

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/24/2011 7:17:00 AM

:') endless love

Mickerlange Charles

Date: 5/23/2011 7:24:00 PM

Thank you Carol, that was very nice of you I really appreciate it. You make me feel very welcome. Thanks again. I love this one, Although short but nice. Love it.

Chamonique Knowles

Date: 5/23/2011 12:56:00 AM

very beautiful and sweet

Ernie J

Date: 5/22/2011 5:38:00 AM

Very nice. Soft, loving message.

Judy Konos

Date: 5/20/2011 9:21:00 AM

excellent...thank you ...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2011 10:44:00 PM

This is a wonderful senryu,,,,, thanks for sharing Carol,..p.d.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/19/2011 3:49:00 PM

* This Is Sooo Beautiful * Beautiful Carol Brown * Smile * It's Even More So My Dear Beautiful Lady * Knowing That Its Jewel * Came From A Queen of Poetry's Most Lovely & Loving of Beautiful Heart's * A Fave * By A Fave * Whom Is Extremely * Easy To Love * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Forever & Beyond * Sarah" *

Daver Austin

Date: 5/19/2011 2:10:00 PM

Love this one - so tender and loving. LOve, daver

Robert Ball

Date: 5/19/2011 8:07:00 AM

Thank you for your comment and it's encouraging as always, love your short poems, I'm going on a radio station in New England on Sunday to promote my second book and will be sure to plug poetry soup on the program, God bless

Don Johnson

Date: 5/19/2011 4:53:00 AM

Well done sweet Carol Brown heaven waits till you're around Don

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2011 2:18:00 PM

reminds me of a movie by a similar name. It's sweet and sincere. thanks for your picnic contest win. Can't wait to see all the winners.

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/18/2011 8:20:00 AM

UR POEM FLOWS...

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/18/2011 8:15:00 AM

ya dear heaven has to wait...fabulous dear!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 5:55:00 AM

Tremendous words of hope and love Carol.. touching and inspirational as well my friend.. thankxx so very much for sharing..for returning..and for choosing my "Fun in the Sun" as one of your winners today..very appreciative to be honored in this way by u .. God is so good..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2011 5:01:00 AM

got more, carol? love your poems..:) huggs , nette

Dawn Mclaughlin

Date: 5/18/2011 4:22:00 AM

i LIKE THIS VERY MUCH SO LITTLE BUT SO MUCH X