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Fingers tremble in the air and my sight is vision caught: A lifeline stretch’s winding as the river deep, It’s all an invisible net begins in my heart. That’s me standing with an outstretched hand. And you’re standing right in front of me, Your trembling hand is almost touching mine. We have lost the count of the days, all we do is waiting. Look each other’s eyes with a brokenly feelings, All we wish is to get that no one’s want to give. And I fell; oh I feel all that ocean of yours All your dreams and your thoughts, The whole world that you carrying. I saw it in your eyes you told me with no words, An autumn nature slowly died And only moon’s our silent witness. Not even night could cover with the shadows those treasure. I’m dying; I am slowly dying, So desperately drown in the void. Please help me you fill me with essence pure That flows with songs of your heart. But our tragedy’s hard to imagine Because all that you want is the same. Year’s passing by but you’re waiting the same sweet essence from me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/18/2012 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Elle. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:17:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner Elle !! :) - oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/25/2011 10:37:00 AM
Smile ˜ I love poetry written from ones heart ˜ Tis the essence of beauty amid the souls mirrors reflection, my dear beautiful Elle ˜ Love the trembling which points unto emotions very deep ˜ Love and desire and longing and dreams ˜ Very beautiful this painting * Merry Christmas to You * My love always, John!:) ˜
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Lena Filatova
Date: 12/26/2011 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for your support, dear John :)
Date: 12/15/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Olajide's contest elle. Love, Carol
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Lena Filatova
Date: 12/15/2011 12:12:00 PM
Thank you for your support xoxo
Date: 12/14/2011 6:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Elle. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 10:25:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup Elle. Look forward to more of your work in the future.
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