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Wait -Edited For Voice Contest-

time fails to stop off the planet i may drop. ... from here 7~12~17 ... ...down added for poetrycontest... tihs writer hasnt a clue about all the names or forms of poetry... we do no write poems ... we can write poetry ... we are no poet ... our mind only defined by maker ... all other thoughts are negotiated whims ... with that wrote ... we gonna give this ... voice thin a shot... pretending through the valley . . of lost sheep are we all but wolves. .crying as we eat devouring. .flesh. .of our own feet crowed are mountainous. .lioness peaks audiances before. the slaughter. they give us. your daughters. we are. all other wolves crying our voices .mererly being transformed. drinking of streams. lapping dogs down. run you little cowards... show your delicate flowers. morphinig me back through your apathetic wastes .... thislife you greed ... is it suffered unto me ... your demands... your demands... your demands... you are a punctuation mark ... my reading voice ... swallow me ... my sweet princess rest me in your lust .... cling from me ... cling ... cling ... cling ... mine arms ... your flesh it calls to me from the moons shine ... suns have expressed thier rays ... rest with me ... momentarily ... make your plea ... my throat wrapped around your love ... teach me to speak ... my love ... my sweet ... my ... my ... my ... my cherry queen ? uhm ... heard this in several different voices none of whic were herd out loud ... this writer uderstands the contest owners opinion. ... "poetry" is written from the heart ... that being said ... to read "poetry" with a voice... other than the one in you head ... would have to read with a differnt type of emotion... there for we are all in aggreement ... anyone that say you can just read us words... other than family being blown up ... wouldnt have the same effect as ... just your voice ... uhm ... ok ... uhm. .... mention was made of ??? "poem"form ... we have never even read a "poetry" book... so ... dont expect to win ... just tumble weed'n thought .... good luck ... "poets"....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2017 5:10:00 PM

Hey, were you thundering Falls or something like that?? (I don't see if you answer my questions or not because I don't get notifications at my emails) but I think I figured out the mystery!

Pipping Stars
Date: 12/30/2017 1:50:00 AM

no ... no mystery ... i only write from this box now ... my 4 names on allpoetry got banned ... branded stars ... stranded stars ... stone glaciers ... grindersedges ... that me ... hows it ... hoes it now ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2017 1:04:00 PM

What I liked a lot in this one was that introduction part: time fails to stop off the planet i may drop. THAT was succinct, neatly rhymed and awesome! You should enter it sometime in a little rhyming contest. Ok, I know I know you because of the ? but my brain cannot contain all the names I have seen here!!! Hope you have a happy new year. I am running late for a granddaughter's birthday party!! Off I go!