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27.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond - 
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

- Voyage -

       The voyage in life has many wonderful opportunities along the way - 
                      don't be locked in one direction - quote by poet              

                                 When the heart is connected
                                  with Venus, the love planet
                                 Dreams as soaring feathers
                                    in the cotton candy sky
                                The scope of time and space,
                                       owned by destiny

                                 The common thread of love
                                 reflect our happiness in life
                                           Sailing moon
                                     brings blessings untold
                                            The voyage
                                  is stronger than I imagined
                                         Our wedding vows
                                     are honest and sublime
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La France Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my contest with this exceptional poem, I like the quote and image too, hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write/quote again. I love your pretty picture... Have a blessed day writing away...........
May Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Wonderful write Anne, Congrats on your win
Beaufort Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 6:31 PM
Anne-Lise, life and love are truly a voyage. This is very strong in feeling and sentiment. Thanks for this wisdom and beauty.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Your "Voyage" is a lovely write/quote/pretty picture. Oh yes, in the cotton candy sky. Love It... "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a wonderful day/week...........................
Poet Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 3:44 PM
Sincerely, Anne-Lise Your captivating contest submission and magnificent poetry have made a lasting effect on me. Your deep feelings were most beautifully expressed in the following lines: "the odyssey surpasses even the grandest of my fantasies, as our matrimonial pledges resonate with unwavering veracity and celestial grace." True love and the beginning of a remarkable adventure that will last a lifetime are captured in your beautiful words. I thoroughly enjoyed delving into the depths of your masterpiece; BOL for the contest quest.
Proxenos Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Love must be present in a marriage in order to travel the voyage of life - how aptly and awesomely you describe it dear friend. I hope you have a wonderful Easter. love and blessings, Jennifer.
George Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 11:16 PM
Marriage is a voyage together along the ocean of life. When love is there, we can swim over every turbulent tide. You have presented the topic so well dear Anne. Wish you a Happy Easter! Love and hugs
One Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 12:04 PM
What a lovely voyage, sadly not many marriages last these days, but your poem is really lovely my friend..
Anaya Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Venus, the love planet, I wish I'd thought of that, a precious picture and great advice in a perfect quote! Best for a win, Anne-Lise! xo
Narain Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Very nice voyage in cosmic world of love.
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 5:58 AM
A journey of life --woven in cosmic vibes. Much enjoyed the loving voice of your poem, Anne-Lise.
Empress Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 1:59 AM
Wedding vows honest and sublime sounds comforting and beautiful. I love the picture youv used here and how you’ve written such a heartfelt and powerful write that flows in such eloquence. Best wishes for the contest. Pleasure reading this
Parker Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 4:21 PM
The voyage through life on emotional seas can be very pleasant indeed
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