Vox Sforzando

I murmur like a rivulet through the 
hitch of your hands, where the canyons 
carve their parched longing into your fingers—
where silences sublimate like cera,
pooling beneath your glissando touch.

Your tremolo breath convulses rough and low
like sibilant submersion in water—
spilling, sinking, staining everything it meets.
I watch the estuary of your gaze split my horizon—
watch you hush abysmal eyes into 
celestially arched surrender.

There is no stillness between starlight, 
only the pull of mighty magnitudes,
fuses lit beneath the ribs,
pulses and throbs teaching the air 
how to cleave—how to… 
sforzando!

Love, here, is neither reserved nor reticent—
it is lightning bottled in glass—
hellfire burning beneath the tide—
language that deconstructs 
even as it is uttered.

I step forward—some faltering cadence,
some submitting ascension—placing my hands into your fire,
not to be consumed, but to remember 
how stars revel and rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 8:10 AM
Dear Laura, your striking use of beautiful, rich imagery is soulful, textured and touching stimulating the heart and the imagination with "hellfire burning beneath the tide" and remembering "how stars revel and rain." So many amazing images and emotions alive in your shining artistry Such a pleasure to read you, my gifted poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Breidenthal Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much Susan. You've quotes my favorite and most enigmatic line - the "hellfire burning beneath the tide" what weird imagery but sometimes that happens I suppose. The image is meant to have its moment. Thanks again for your kind words. <3 Laura
Bordner Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 4:08 PM
"I watch the estuary of your gaze split my horizin..." penetrating the stronghold of your sensuous subconscious, revealing Love's sweet clarity Laura. "Fuses lit beneath the ribs, pulses and throbs teaching the air how to cleave..." your confidence is in full bloom Poetess. This is a WoW poem! The star heat has become spirit.
Breidenthal Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 7:48 PM
Thank you Justin. You are the definition of star heat. I adore your thoughts, adore you. <3 Laura
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