Vow of Love

L ittle needs to be said O nly this that you dread V ow to always be true E nable me to love you

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/30/2019 12:11:00 PM

Nicely penned; and true.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/30/2019 6:22:00 PM

Yup. All it takes is commitment --- so hard for some. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/29/2019 11:21:00 AM

Vow to always be true, enables me to love you - that says it all Gershon! I second and thirds that. Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2019 10:48:00 PM

With your 'second and third,' you can plead the 5th (amendment --- an American expression, I guess, come to think of it). At any rate, thank you for your encouragement, Jennifer. ~ gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/28/2019 11:39:00 PM

Little things do need to be said - it means so much!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2019 10:47:00 PM

Little things are really big deals hiding in diminuitive shapes, I guess. Thanks for the observation, Michelle! :) gw

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/28/2019 10:10:00 PM

"Enable me"... Like that...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2019 10:46:00 PM

Thanks for your take on this little acrostic, Arturo. Best wishes, gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/28/2019 7:12:00 PM

A gem, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2019 10:46:00 PM

Thanks, Line. Appreciated, esp. as I haven't had much success with acrostics to date. :) gw