Volcano

when volcano bursts out total deposits come out all neighbors go out gradually becomes calm down

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/28/2011 9:36:00 PM

It's the flare that fascinates. You tell about things I can think about.

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/29/2011 9:56:00 AM

Good day my friend. Thank you for your kind comment that you can think about what I tell. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 10:15:00 AM

Enjoyed reading the words which flowed from you pen today Bl. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/21/2011 12:08:00 PM

Just trying to avail absolute sense poured by God in to the Ocean of human World. Your poetry boosts up my thoughts to be enriched in sense, because has no meaning which I feel in myself. I have no courage to deny the reality, because I fear GOD for my wrong deeds done knowingly or unknowingly. bl